[Alac-sc-outreach] Input welcome - Beginner's Guide to At-Large Structures

[Dev Anand Teelucksingh]

Dear Ariel, Nathalie, Staff

First, Many Thanks for this, there are a lot of re-wording and
suggested edits which required a lot of effort and patience to go
through.

A challenge is that to see the suggested edits, one has to hover over
a lot of highlighted (including crossed out or underlined words,
comment icons) to see what are the suggested edits are which makes it
challenging to review.

Is there a draft "clean" version with the edits made? It would make
the review faster and see whether the guide conveys the topic of
At-Large Structures and Individuals in a clear, straightforward
manner.

Kind Regards,

Dev Anand










On Mon, Sep 28, 2015 at 1:16 PM, Ariel Liang <ariel.liang at icann.org> wrote:
> Hello All,
>
> Following today’s Outreach & Engagement Subcommittee call, please be so kind
> to submit your comments on the Redline version of the Beginner’s Guide in
> its wiki workspace, using the comment function by Monday 05 October 2015:
> https://community.icann.org/x/zSvRAg.
>
> If you wish to provide more substantive comments, you may also send them via
> emails directly to staff at atlarge.icann.org.
>
> As a disclaimer, we are mainly doing some *cosmetic* changes to the Guide,
> as a lot of its content (text, graphic, etc.) will be repurposed for the new
> At-Large website and can be updated more easily there. We will solicit
> further input from the community with regard to beginners-friendly content
> when the Beta site is up and running.
>
> Thank you very much for your time and help in this!
>
> Best Regards,
> Ariel
>
> From: Ariel Liang <ariel.liang at icann.org>
> Date: Sunday, September 27, 2015 at 3:40 PM
> To: <alac-sc-outreach at atlarge-lists.icann.org>
> Cc: "devtee at gmail.com" <devtee at gmail.com>, ICANN At-Large Staff
> <staff at atlarge.icann.org>, Nathalie Peregrine <nathalie.peregrine at icann.org>
> Subject: Input welcome - Beginner's Guide to At-Large Structures
>
> Dear All,
>
> As you are probably aware, the Beginner’s Guide to At-Large Structures is
> going through an updating process. Staff took the lead and suggested a
> number of updates, ranging from links and graphics to text and the Guide's
> overall structure. The redline version is posted here:
> https://community.icann.org/x/zSvRAg.
>
> We would welcome input from the community with regard to those suggested
> changes. This Guide will also be discussed during tomorrow’s Outreach &
> Engagement Subcommittee teleconference.
>
> Thank you in advance for your input and help!
>
> Best Regards,
> Ariel
>
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