<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><font color="#002e7a" class="">Thank you Dev for sharing the presentation.</font><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><br class=""></font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class="">I have some proposals of modification:</font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class=""><br class=""></u></b></font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class="">Page 6</u>:</b> Change the first para in this way: Any Internet End User Group or Group that supports the interests of individual end users can be a part of the At-Large Community. These include:</font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><br class=""></font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class="">Page 10</u>: </b>First para: replace « represent » by « defend » </font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class=""><br class=""></u></b></font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class="">Page 11</u>:</b> second para: </font>
<!--StartFragment--><font color="#002e7a" class="">At-Large Community members may
draft
position statements, comment on draft statements and
propose there drafts to the ALAC, and engage in …..</font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class=""><br class=""></u></b></font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class="">Page 14</u>:</b> Last para: ….. such as the SSAC, GNSO, ccNSO and GAC</font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class=""><br class=""></u></b></font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class="">Page 15</u>: </b>First para: Replace « core mission » by « main activities » </font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class=""><br class=""></u></b></font></div><div class=""><font color="#002e7a" class=""><b class=""><u class="">Page 16</u>:</b> replace the text by the list of At-Large Working Groups</font></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div apple-content-edited="true" class="">
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