[AT-Review] Draft

Chris Disspain ceo at auda.org.au
Sun Dec 19 01:57:29 UTC 2010


Hi All,

I am still in dc due to England closing down because of unexpected snow. In winter. Who'd have thought!

Travelling to NYC tomorrow and will work on the train and email asap. 

Cheers,

Chris Disspain
CEO - auDA
Sent from my phone

On 19/12/2010, at 12:31, "Brian Cute" <bcute at afilias.info> wrote:

> RT,
> 
> 
> 
> Attached is the most recent version of the document.  First let me note the
> following:
> 
> 
> 
> -          There are more edits to be made to the respective WG sections.
> The edits provided by Fiona offer a nice model for "updating" the respective
> WG sections to reflect the incorporation of public comment and inputs from
> the Cartagena meeting.  I will follow this model in edits I will make to WG#
> 3 section.
> 
> -          We will need to cite to public comments that we received in
> Cartagena (yes Cheryl including the At-Large comments which I have read and
> which do have bearing on a couple of the recommendations) and we will need
> to articulate the arguments that we agreed with in modifying recommendations
> and identify some comments that we "rejected" and articulate those reasons
> as well.
> 
> -          This final drafting and polish (including correlation of
> numbering schemes for the recommendations, identifying the "priority"
> recommendations (given Larry's list used the "old" numbering scheme we will
> have to re map those) and to scrub the footnotes etc.
> 
> -          I am committed to continue working on the document past the
> Christmas holiday to ensure we have a strong and clean document to submit to
> the Board.
> 
> -          That being said, please get any edits you have in quickly (James
> do you want to take a crack at WG#4 or shall i?  I don't mind either way.)
> 
> -          Please read the Executive Summary (noting that I will be adding
> "Findings" excerpts before each group of recommendations in the next draft
> 
> -          Please read Appendix A and Appendix B - these contain the
> description and background of the ATRT process and the ATRT's "observations"
> about what could have gone better.
> 
> 
> 
> I look forward to speaking with you on the call on Monday.  
> 
> 
> 
> Regards,
> 
> Brian
> 
> <atrtmasterfinal3.0.doc>



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