[AT-Review] Master Final - CD redline

Manal Ismail manal at tra.gov.eg
Tue Dec 21 00:59:01 UTC 2010


Dear Brian ..
Dear All ..
 
While discussing Annex B, I suddenly could not hear anyone and was asked to hang up to be re-dialed ..
As it seems they are facing difficulties in re-connecting me, I'm re-submitting a few edits which I did not get the change to point out during the call .. I have accepted all changes made by Chris and added mine in track changes .. to make things easier those are:
 
page 30: I suggest adding reference to the GAC Interim Principles on IDN ccTLDs ..
page 31: I believe we should replace Cartagena & Colombia by San Francisco as the JWG indicated that they will postpone finalization of their report till the meeting in San Francisco to take into consideration the ATRT recommendations ..
page 33: There is a typo stating 'Board advice' instead of 'GAC advice' .. 
 
Finally I would like to re-thank Fiona and Larry for all their efforts in drafting WG2 report ..
 
Merry Christmas to everyone !!
 
--Manal

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From: at-review-bounces at icann.org on behalf of Chris Disspain
Sent: Sun 19/12/2010 09:01 PM
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Subject: [AT-Review] Master Final - CD redline



All,

 

My red line is attached.

 

I have made amendments to the exec summary, some consequent amendments to the recommendations in the body of the report and to Appendices A and B.

 

I will, over the next few days, work on adding public comment paragraphs to both sections of the Report of WG 1.

 

Olivier, if you are able to provide me with a summary of on line and Cartagena public comment on the WG1 recommendations that would be most helpful.

 

Cheers,

 

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