[AT-Review] Draft of Public Comment document

Fabio Colasanti fabio at colasanti.it
Fri Oct 15 06:29:32 UTC 2010


Dear all,

 

Can you use this version to make your edits?

 

I have simply attempted to harmonize somewhat the formatting across the
various parts of the document, and I have inserted page numbers and a date
in the footer.

 

All the best,

 

Fabio

 

From: at-review-bounces at icann.org [mailto:at-review-bounces at icann.org] On
Behalf Of Brian Cute
Sent: 15 October 2010 06:19
To: at-review at icann.org
Cc: ugasser at cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline Nolan'
Subject: [AT-Review] Draft of Public Comment document

 

RT,

 

Attached is a draft of the document for Public Comment.  Please note the
following:

 

-          WG1 is complete 

-          WG2 - waiting on Larry's next draft which will include minimal
edits based on discussion in Boston

-          WG3 - contains revised Recommendation #8 based on discussion in
Boston

-          WG4 - contains revised Recommendations based on discussion in
Boston

 

Please review the entire draft and provide any edits specific to the revised
recommendations in WG3 and WG4 documents as well as edits on the "wrapper"
document that precedes the WG texts.  I will incorporate RT edits and
continue to refine the draft.

 

Regards,

Brian

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