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I am traveling today but I feel strongly that while the public questions cover the right subjects we really need to ask commenters to provide specific examples where ICANN did not act in an accountable or transparent manner. Only then can we peform the "forensics" to determine what the specific problem was. I am happy to provide some specific text but cannot supply it until tomorrow.<br><br>Larry</font></div>
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<br><b>Sent</b>: Fri May 14 21:04:07 2010<br><b>Subject</b>: Re: [AT-Review] Questions for the ICANN Community as Call for Public Comment => was Work items
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Taking the last red-line version and accepting the changes (due to no evidence to the contrary) I've prepared the attached in a form that should allow for Carol Cornell <<a href="mailto:carole.cornell@icann.org">carole.cornell@icann.org</a>>, ( who is the person we need to deal with to get these questions out as a 'call for public comment' BTW) to as quickly as possible fill the template in and send out the announce by Monday which then allows for the 45 day comment to run over the Brussels meeting time.<div>
<br></div><div>Brian as ATRT Chair you should (as soon as the ATRT signs of on the text) get this over to Carole ASAP (I've taken the liberty of asking Heidi to give her a 'heads up' that it will be forthcoming post haste) being a Friday in MdR and our dates time critical...</div>
<div><br></div><div>Attached is a word, ODT and PDF version of the final mark up of questions from the latest re-line version (as page 2) and the preamble ans placeholder materials that are needed for the Public Comments template... Our Work Team also discussed the development of survey tools that will allow more quantitative information to be sourced from the community and I will forwards some drafts of those concepts in the near future, but they are not as time critical as this 'Call for Public Comment' is...<br>
<div><br></div><div><br clear="all">Cheryl Langdon-Orr<br>(CLO)<br><br>
<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 15 May 2010 07:30, Brian Cute <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info" target="_blank">briancute@afilias.info</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Willie,</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks for that. I recall the
group deciding to add a second paragraph to the one you quoted. Do you have
that by chance? I will look at the documents as well to try to find it.</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best,</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Brian</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:windowtext"> Willie Currie [mailto:<a href="mailto:wcurrie@apc.org" target="_blank">wcurrie@apc.org</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 14, 2010 12:18 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info" target="_blank">briancute@afilias.info</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:olivier.muron@orange-ftgroup.com" target="_blank">olivier.muron@orange-ftgroup.com</a>; <a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org" target="_blank">at-review@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [AT-Review] Work items</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Brian<br>
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I have the following:<br>
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Accountability refers to a process by which individuals and organizations are
answerable for their actions, decisions and processes on an ongoing basis and
for the consequences that follow from them.<br>
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Willie<br>
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Brian Cute wrote: </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Willie and Olivier,</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Could you forward the text of
the working definition that the Team put together during our session. I
would like to include it in the Preliminary Report before we post the
Report. Thanks.</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Regards,</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Brian</span></p>
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 14, 2010 9:47 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:wcurrie@apc.org" target="_blank">wcurrie@apc.org</a>; <a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info" target="_blank">briancute@afilias.info</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org" target="_blank">at-review@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] Work items</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:blue">Willie, Brian, all,</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:blue">I rephrased the first two questions. I don't feel at
ease beginning the consultation with " Do you think there is a
problem...". I think it might be better to begin with a more
neutral question."</span><span lang="EN-ZA" style="color:blue">What is your
general assessment of...".</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:blue">I added a general question on ICANN's commitment to the interests
of global Internet users, </span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:blue">Best,</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:blue">Olivier</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span lang="FR" style="font-size:10.0pt">De :</span></b><span lang="FR" style="font-size:10.0pt"> <a href="mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">at-review-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>De la part de</b> Willie Currie<br>
<b>Envoyé :</b> vendredi 14 mai 2010 15:20<br>
<b>À :</b> <a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info" target="_blank">briancute@afilias.info</a><br>
<b>Cc :</b> <a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org" target="_blank">at-review@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Objet :</b> Re: [AT-Review] Work items</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Brian, all<br>
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Here is the latest version of the questions, with a reformulation of question 4
by Fabio.<br>
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Best<br>
Willie<br>
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Brian Cute wrote: </p>
<p class="MsoNormal">RT,</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Our most immediate work item is the draft questions for the
Community that were drafted by Cheryl, Olivier and Willie. We have a <u>deadline
of May 15<sup>th</sup></u> to submit the questions for posting. Please
review the questions and post any proposed edits so we can meet this deadline.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Looking forward, since paragraph 9.1 of the AoC has 5 areas
of review (the Board, the GAC, public input, public support of decisions and
policy development process), I suggest that we establish “sub-committees”
headed by two members of the RT who oversee the work of each area of
review. The two responsible members would ensure that the review work
remains focused and aligned with the RT’s methodology and on time for
deliverables in December. The sub- committee approach would not prevent
any RT member from participating directly in the work of any of the 5 areas of
review – it is intended to ensure organization and efficiency given our the
limited number of members on the RT.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">If this approach is acceptable, please think about the area
that you would like to volunteer for and indicate that in advance of our next
scheduled call. The Doodle for our next call is almost complete. If
you haven’t indicated your availability, please do so and we will send out the
meeting maker and telephone bridge.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Regards,</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Brian</p>
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