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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>I have added two sentences to questions #1 and #2, respectively
to try to address Larry’s point. Please provide ANY editorial suggestion you
have TODAY as this is the deadline for getting the document out for posting.
Thank you.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Larry Strickling
[mailto:Lstrickling@ntia.doc.gov] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Saturday, May 15, 2010 3:54 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'langdonorr@gmail.com'; 'at-review@icann.org'<br>
<b>Cc:</b> 'marco.lorenzoni@icann.org'; 'alice.jansen@icann.org'<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [AT-Review] Questions for the ICANN Community as Call for
Public Comment => was Work items<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";
color:navy'>I am traveling today but I feel strongly that while the public
questions cover the right subjects we really need to ask commenters to provide
specific examples where ICANN did not act in an accountable or transparent
manner. Only then can we peform the "forensics" to determine what the
specific problem was. I am happy to provide some specific text but cannot
supply it until tomorrow.<br>
<br>
Larry</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>: at-review-bounces@icann.org
<at-review-bounces@icann.org> <br>
<b>To</b>: at-review@icann.org <at-review@icann.org> <br>
<b>Cc</b>: Marco Lorenzoni <marco.lorenzoni@icann.org>; Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>
<br>
<b>Sent</b>: Fri May 14 21:04:07 2010<br>
<b>Subject</b>: Re: [AT-Review] Questions for the ICANN Community as Call for
Public Comment => was Work items </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Taking the last red-line version and accepting the changes
(due to no evidence to the contrary) I've prepared the attached
in a form that should allow for Carol Cornell <<a
href="mailto:carole.cornell@icann.org">carole.cornell@icann.org</a>>, (
who is the person we need to deal with to get these questions out as a 'call
for public comment' BTW) to as quickly as possible fill the template in
and send out the announce by Monday which then allows for the 45 day comment to
run over the Brussels meeting time.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Brian as ATRT Chair you should (as soon as the ATRT signs of
on the text) get this over to Carole ASAP (I've taken the liberty of
asking Heidi to give her a 'heads up' that it will be forthcoming post haste)
being a Friday in MdR and our dates time critical...<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Attached is a word, ODT and PDF version of the final mark up
of questions from the latest re-line version (as page 2) and the preamble ans
placeholder materials that are needed for the
Public Comments template... Our Work Team also discussed the
development of survey tools that will allow more quantitative information to be
sourced from the community and I will forwards some drafts of those concepts
in the near future, but they are not as time critical as this 'Call for
Public Comment' is...<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><br clear=all>
Cheryl Langdon-Orr<br>
(CLO)<br>
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<p class=MsoNormal>On 15 May 2010 07:30, Brian Cute <<a
href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info" target="_blank">briancute@afilias.info</a>>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'>Willie,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'>Thanks for that. I recall the group deciding to add
a second paragraph to the one you quoted. Do you have that by
chance? I will look at the documents as well to try to find it.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style='color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'>Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'>Brian</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style='color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> Willie
Currie [mailto:<a href="mailto:wcurrie@apc.org" target="_blank">wcurrie@apc.org</a>]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 14, 2010 12:18 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info" target="_blank">briancute@afilias.info</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:olivier.muron@orange-ftgroup.com" target="_blank">olivier.muron@orange-ftgroup.com</a>;
<a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org" target="_blank">at-review@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [AT-Review] Work items</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>Brian<br>
<br>
I have the following:<br>
<br>
Accountability refers to a process by which individuals and organizations are
answerable for their actions, decisions and processes on an ongoing basis and
for the consequences that follow from them.<br>
<br>
Willie<br>
<br>
Brian Cute wrote: <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'>Willie and Olivier,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'>Could you forward the text of the working definition that
the Team put together during our session. I would like to include it in
the Preliminary Report before we post the Report. Thanks.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style='color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'>Regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'>Brian</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> <a
href="mailto:olivier.muron@orange-ftgroup.com" target="_blank">olivier.muron@orange-ftgroup.com</a>
[<a href="mailto:olivier.muron@orange-ftgroup.com" target="_blank">mailto:olivier.muron@orange-ftgroup.com</a>]
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 14, 2010 9:47 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:wcurrie@apc.org" target="_blank">wcurrie@apc.org</a>;
<a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info" target="_blank">briancute@afilias.info</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org" target="_blank">at-review@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] Work items</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>Willie, Brian, all,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>I rephrased the first two questions. I
don't feel at ease beginning the consultation with " Do you
think there is a problem...". I think it might be better to
begin with a more neutral question."</span><span lang=EN-ZA
style='color:blue'>What is your general assessment of...".</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>I added a general question on ICANN's
commitment to the interests of global Internet users, </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style='font-size:10.0pt;color:blue'>Olivier</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-bottom:12.0pt'><b><span
lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt'>De :</span></b><span lang=FR
style='font-size:10.0pt'> <a href="mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org"
target="_blank">at-review-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a
href="mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>De la part de</b> Willie Currie<br>
<b>Envoyé :</b> vendredi 14 mai 2010 15:20<br>
<b>À :</b> <a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info" target="_blank">briancute@afilias.info</a><br>
<b>Cc :</b> <a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org" target="_blank">at-review@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Objet :</b> Re: [AT-Review] Work items</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>Brian,
all<br>
<br>
Here is the latest version of the questions, with a reformulation of question 4
by Fabio.<br>
<br>
Best<br>
Willie<br>
<br>
Brian Cute wrote: <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>RT,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>Our
most immediate work item is the draft questions for the Community that were
drafted by Cheryl, Olivier and Willie. We have a <u>deadline of May 15<sup>th</sup></u>
to submit the questions for posting. Please review the questions and post
any proposed edits so we can meet this deadline.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>Looking
forward, since paragraph 9.1 of the AoC has 5 areas of review (the Board, the
GAC, public input, public support of decisions and policy development process),
I suggest that we establish “sub-committees” headed by two members of the RT
who oversee the work of each area of review. The two responsible members
would ensure that the review work remains focused and aligned with the RT’s
methodology and on time for deliverables in December. The sub- committee
approach would not prevent any RT member from participating directly in the
work of any of the 5 areas of review – it is intended to ensure organization
and efficiency given our the limited number of members on the RT.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>If
this approach is acceptable, please think about the area that you would like to
volunteer for and indicate that in advance of our next scheduled call.
The Doodle for our next call is almost complete. If you haven’t indicated
your availability, please do so and we will send out the meeting maker and
telephone bridge.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'>Brian<o:p></o:p></p>
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