<html><body><span style="font-family:Verdana; color:#000000; font-size:10pt;"><div><span style="border-collapse: separate;color: rgb(0, 0, 0);font-family: Times;font-style: normal;font-variant: normal;font-weight: normal;letter-spacing: normal;line-height: normal;orphans: 2;text-align: auto;text-indent: 0px;text-transform: none;white-space: normal;widows: 2;word-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px;-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;font-size: medium;" mce_style="border-collapse: separate;color: #000000;font-family: Times;font-style: normal;font-variant: normal;font-weight: normal;letter-spacing: normal;line-height: normal;orphans: 2;text-align: auto;text-indent: 0px;text-transform: none;white-space: normal;widows: 2;word-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px;-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;" mce_style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;"><div><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;">Brian</span></div><div><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><br></span></div><div><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;">A few comments/questions on the document:</span></div><div><span style="border-collapse: separate; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size: medium; " mce_style="border-collapse: separate;color: #000000;font-family: Times;font-style: normal;font-variant: normal;font-weight: normal;letter-spacing: normal;line-height: normal;orphans: 2;text-align: auto;text-indent: 0px;text-transform: none;white-space: normal;widows: 2;word-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px;-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;font-size: medium;"><span style="font-size: 13px; text-align: left; " mce_style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;"><div><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><br>1. </span></span></span><b><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-weight: normal;" mce_fixed="1">Regarding the second-to-last question in WG3 report: What is the purpose of this? How does it differ from the Fast Track PDP proposed by the PPSC-PDP in their interim report?</span></span></span></span></b></div><div><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><br></span></span></span></div><div><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;">2. <span style="border-collapse: separate; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Times; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size: medium; clear: both; " mce_style="border-collapse: separate;color: #000000;font-family: Times;font-style: normal;font-variant: normal;font-weight: normal;letter-spacing: normal;line-height: normal;orphans: 2;text-align: auto;text-indent: 0px;text-transform: none;white-space: normal;widows: 2;word-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px;-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;" mce_style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;"><b><span mce_="" style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_="" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span mce_="" style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_fixed="1" style="font-weight: normal;" mce_style="font-weight: normal;">Regarding Recommendation 8 in the WG3 Report: This recommendation isn't entirely clear. Who will complete the input template? Would it be the members of the PDP WG, or the SO leadership, or Staff?</span></span></span></span></b></span></span></span></span></span></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" face="verdana, geneva"><br></font></div><div><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;">3. </span></span></span><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: verdana, geneva; " mce_fixed="1">Regarding the third-to-last review question in WG2 report: Why is there a need to "authorize" GAC participation and engagement in the policy development process? Do the by-laws currently exclude them from doing so, or are we seeking to build a formal process for this? If so, would the by-laws for all SOs need modification?</span></div></span></span><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="font-family: verdana, geneva; " mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><br style="clear: both; "></span></span></span></span></div></span></span></div><div><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="border-collapse: separate;color: #000000;font-family: Times;font-style: normal;font-variant: normal;font-weight: normal;letter-spacing: normal;line-height: normal;orphans: 2;text-align: auto;text-indent: 0px;text-transform: none;white-space: normal;widows: 2;word-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px;-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;font-size: medium;" mce_style="border-collapse: separate;color: #000000;font-family: Times;font-style: normal;font-variant: normal;font-weight: normal;letter-spacing: normal;line-height: normal;orphans: 2;text-align: auto;text-indent: 0px;text-transform: none;white-space: normal;widows: 2;word-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px;-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;" mce_style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;"><span style="font-family: verdana, geneva; " mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;">Finally, the document put out for comment should be structured with section, page, or line numbers to aid in navigation and comment reference.</span></span></span></span></span></span></span></div><div><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span style="border-collapse: separate; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Times; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size: medium; clear: both; " mce_style="border-collapse: separate;color: #000000;font-family: Times;font-style: normal;font-variant: normal;font-weight: normal;letter-spacing: normal;line-height: normal;orphans: 2;text-align: auto;text-indent: 0px;text-transform: none;white-space: normal;widows: 2;word-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px;-webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px;-webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none;-webkit-text-size-adjust: auto;-webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;font-size: medium;"><span style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;" mce_style="font-family: Arial;font-size: 13px;text-align: left;"><br></span></span></span></span></span></span></div><div><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;">Warren<br><br>Warren Adelman<br>President & COO<br></span></span></span></span><a target="_blank" href="http://GoDaddy.com"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;">GoDaddy.com</span></span></span></span></a><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><br></span></span></span></span><a target="_blank" href="mailto:warren@godaddy.com"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;">warren@godaddy.com</span></span></span></span></a><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><br></span></span></span></span></div><div><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;">twitter: </span></span></span></span><a target="_blank" href="http://twitter.com/asocialcontract"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;">http://twitter.com/asocialcontract</span></span></span></span></a><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><br></span></span></span></span><a target="_blank" href="http://www.godaddy.com"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt;" mce_style="font-size: 10pt;"><span mce_style="font-family: verdana, geneva;" style="font-family: verdana, geneva;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; " mce_style="font-size: 10pt;">http://www.godaddy.com</span></span></span></span></a></div><div><br><br></div><blockquote id="replyBlockquote" webmail="1" style="border-left: 2px solid blue; margin-left: 8px; padding-left: 8px; font-size:10pt; color:black; font-family:verdana;"> <div id="wmQuoteWrapper"> -------- Original Message --------<br> Subject: [AT-Review] Draft of Public Comment document<br> From: "Brian Cute" <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info">briancute@afilias.info</a>><br> Date: Thu, October 14, 2010 9:19 pm<br> To: <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:at-review@icann.org">at-review@icann.org</a>><br> Cc: <a target="_blank" href="mailto:ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu">ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu</a>, "'Caroline Nolan'"<br> <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:cnolan@cyber.law.harvard.edu">cnolan@cyber.law.harvard.edu</a>><br> <br> <style>
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</style> <div class="WordSection1"> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">RT,<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Attached is a draft of the document for Public Comment. Please note the following:<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="mso-list:Ignore" mce_style="mso-list: Ignore;">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"" mce_style="font: 7.0pt "Times New Roman";"> </span></span>WG1 is complete <o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="mso-list:Ignore" mce_style="mso-list: Ignore;">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"" mce_style="font: 7.0pt "Times New Roman";"> </span></span>WG2 – waiting on Larry’s next draft which will include minimal edits based on discussion in Boston<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="mso-list:Ignore" mce_style="mso-list: Ignore;">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"" mce_style="font: 7.0pt "Times New Roman";"> </span></span>WG3 – contains revised Recommendation #8 based on discussion in Boston<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="mso-list:Ignore" mce_style="mso-list: Ignore;">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"" mce_style="font: 7.0pt "Times New Roman";"> </span></span>WG4 – contains revised Recommendations based on discussion in Boston<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Please review the entire draft and provide any edits specific to the revised recommendations in WG3 and WG4 documents as well as edits on the “wrapper” document that precedes the WG texts. I will incorporate RT edits and continue to refine the draft.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Regards,<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Brian<o:p></o:p></div> </div> <hr>_______________________________________________<br> AT-Review mailing list<br> <a target="_blank" href="mailto:AT-Review@icann.org">AT-Review@icann.org</a><br> <a target="_blank" href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/at-review">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/at-review</a><br> </div> </blockquote></span></body></html>