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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>I’ve been really jammed on other
matters the last two days but will try to get my edits in by noon EDT today.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Manal Ismail<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, October 20, 2010 9:15 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> briancute@afilias.info; at-review@icann.org;
ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; Caroline Nolan; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [AT-Review] Draft - next version<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Thanks Brian ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>A quick first reaction with
regards to WG2 is the missing of a reference to the 'quorum' needed to be
present at any GAC meeting for the GAC to be able to take decisions .. It's in
the current version of the GAC Operating Principles</span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><a
href="http://gac.icann.org/system/files/GAC_Operating_Principles_1.pdf">http://gac.icann.org/system/files/GAC_Operating_Principles_1.pdf</a>,
<span style='color:#1F497D'>principle 40 .. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Larry has kindly offered to
insert it in the report ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Kind Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>--Manal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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at-review-bounces@icann.org [mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf
Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, October 20, 2010 6:48 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline
Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] Draft - next version<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>RT,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Attached is the next version of the draft which incorporates
our discussion from the call yesterday. Please note and review the
following changes:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Berkman statement of methodology – p.3<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Revised description of PPC activities – p. 29<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Corrected quote from public comment – pp. 29-30<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Cheryl’s definition of Cross Community deliberation – p. 29<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>WG3 Findings – p. 31<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>WG3 revised recommendation #8 – p.32<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>WG3 revised recommendation #9 – p.33 <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>WG4 – please read in entirety. Substantial edits provided
by Chris.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>ATRT RFI to ICANN Staff – text from Staff response – p.37-39<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>California law summary (reviewed and edited by Berkman) –
p.42-43<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>One point from our call that is not yet addressed in the
draft is Larry’s point concerning the IRP undertaking de novo review.
Please offer language for inclusion.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Note that I will do further editing to address grammar,
style, structure and citations. If anyone has edits to suggest on this
front please send them to me.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Brian <o:p></o:p></p>
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