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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Thank you Fabio.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Fabio Colasanti
[mailto:fabio@colasanti.it] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, October 21, 2010 5:29 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu;
rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline Nolan'<br>
<b>Cc:</b> 'Alice Jansen'<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] Edits on version 7<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Dear all,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>A few small edits on the "draftMaster 7".<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:28.35pt;text-align:justify;text-indent:
-28.35pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='font-family:
Wingdings'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>Ÿ<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><b><i><u>Page 4, first paragraph, last sentence</u></i></b>:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:28.35pt'>"… and the ATRT will refine
its Proposed Recommendations <b><i><s><u>based</u></s></i></b> also on the
basis of public comment received to produce Final Recommendations to the ICANN
Board of Directors."<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:28.35pt;text-align:justify;text-indent:
-28.35pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='font-family:
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</span></span></span><![endif]><b><i><u>Page 17, section "The Board
Review", point 4, last sentence</u></i></b>:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:28.35pt'>I would replace the last
sentence "<i>This document also fails to address decision making</i>."
with "<i>This document also does not address the transparency of decision
making</i>". Brian had already asked Chris whether
"decision making" or "transparency of the decision making"
was what we were concerned about. I would also replace the word
"fails" with "does not". The former has too strong a
negative connotation.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:28.35pt;text-indent:-28.35pt'><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:28.35pt;text-align:justify;text-indent:
-28.35pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span style='font-family:
Wingdings'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>Ÿ<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><b><i><u>Page 22, section "Summary of GAC
activities", third line</u></i></b>:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:56.7pt;text-indent:-28.35pt'>"Whois
Services", a "c" is missing.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>All the best,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Fabio<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR-BE>Fabio </span><span lang=FR-BE
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Colasanti<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR-BE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>36,
rue des Patriotes<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR-BE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>B-1000
Bruxelles<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR-BE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>tel.
+32 2 736 26 16<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR-BE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>mob.
+32 488 14 24 05<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR-BE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>fabio@colasanti.it<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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