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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Chris,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Thanks for the contribution. I
may have in fact I misconstrued Larry’s comments in the draft. Larry, does
Chris’ attached version square with your suggestions? If not, please indicate
any different view you have so we can settle this portion of the document. RT
members, if you have comments with respect to Chris’ draft please weigh in now.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Chris Disspain
[mailto:ceo@auda.org.au] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, October 21, 2010 7:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> briancute@afilias.info; at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu;
'Caroline Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] WG4<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Brian,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I think you have gone too far with the suggested changes based
on my understanding of Larry’s comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Attached is a document setting out the WG4 recommendations from
ATRT Draft Master 5.0 with Larry’s comments (or at least my interpretation of
them) added AND below in the same document what the recommendations would look
like if we action Larry’s comments. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I would be happy to proceed with these recommendations. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I have not addressed Larry’s comments on language in the
Findings section of WG4 but, in the main, agree with him. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'>Cheers, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, 22 October 2010 04:03<br>
<b>To:</b> at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline
Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] WG4<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>RT<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Attached is a revised WG4 section taking into account
Larry’s remarks. Please review and suggest any edit so we can lock this
down. I continue to check the footnotes, citations and source references.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal>Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Brian<o:p></o:p></p>
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