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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Enclosed is both a redline
version as well as clean version of the document. They include the following<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Shifting the
overarching recommendation to the end of the list in the executive summary.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Inserting the date
options highlighted in yellow to the recommendations in the individual working
group reports. If folks are ok with this overall concept and approach,
then we would suggest removing the yellow highlights (of course retaining the
text) prior to publication.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>The inclusion in the
WG 2 report about the quorum needed for GAC decisions to respond to Manal’s
earlier request.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Revised WG 4 report
with recommendations which we believe address the points made by Chris earlier.
Folks should review this section carefully to make sure it covers all
their points. Highlighted in green in both versions (clean and redline) in
the executive summary and the WG 4 report is the outstanding question from
Fabio – should the first recommendation include the points on the community
re-vote and the board removal option, at this time. Larry’s
recollection of the meeting in Cambridge is that the ATRT had asked Berkman to
look into the community re-vote option.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0in'><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0in'><span style='color:#1F497D'>The
report does still contain a yellow highlighted paragraph on page 36. We
are ok with re-moving the highlight, but were unsure why the highlight was
there.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0in'><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0in'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Once
Fabio’s question is addressed we are ok with publication of the report as
it appears in the clean version of the document, but would of course be happy
to discuss further if there are still issues/concerns.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Fiona<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>
at-review-bounces@icann.org [mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf
Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, October 22, 2010 8:54 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline
Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] Draft - updated version<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>RT,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Attached is an updated version that incorporates Fabio and
Olivier’s edits and which also includes a proposed Executive Summary and
Recommendations at the beginning of the document. WG4 is being sorted out
separately per the earlier emails and will be incorporated into this document
when it is stable (along with a section in the Executive Summary and
Recommendations at the beginning of the document.). The citations have
been checked but please feel free to point out any additional edits on that
front as well.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Brian<o:p></o:p></p>
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