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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Brian,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'>I think you have gone too far with the suggested changes based
on my understanding of Larry’s comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'>Attached is a document setting out the WG4 recommendations from ATRT
Draft Master 5.0 with Larry’s comments (or at least my interpretation of
them) added AND below in the same document what the recommendations would look
like if we action Larry’s comments. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'>I would be happy to proceed with these recommendations. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'>I have not addressed Larry’s comments on language in the
Findings section of WG4 but, in the main, agree with him. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
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font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, 22 October 2010 04:03<br>
<b>To:</b> at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline
Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] WG4<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>RT<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Attached is a revised WG4 section taking
into account Larry’s remarks. Please review and suggest any edit so
we can lock this down. I continue to check the footnotes, citations and
source references.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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