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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I haven’t read the full document yet but confirm that I am happy
with the re-drafts of WG4 recommendations.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'>Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Chris Disspain </span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;
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color:#7030A0'>Chief Executive Officer</span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:
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color:#7030A0'>.au Domain Administration Ltd</span><span lang=EN-AU
style='color:#7030A0'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'><a href="tel:1300%20732%20929"><span style='color:#7030A0;
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style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>www.auda.org.au</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Fiona Alexander<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Saturday, 23 October 2010 02:26<br>
<b>To:</b> 'briancute@afilias.info'; at-review@icann.org;
ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [AT-Review] Draft - updated version<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Enclosed is both a
redline version as well as clean version of the document. They include
the following<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Shifting
the overarching recommendation to the end of the list in the executive summary.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Inserting
the date options highlighted in yellow to the recommendations in the individual
working group reports. If folks are ok with this overall concept and
approach, then we would suggest removing the yellow highlights (of course
retaining the text) prior to publication.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>The
inclusion in the WG 2 report about the quorum needed for GAC decisions to
respond to Manal’s earlier request.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Revised
WG 4 report with recommendations which we believe address the points made by
Chris earlier. Folks should review this section carefully to make sure it
covers all their points. Highlighted in green in both versions (clean and
redline) in the executive summary and the WG 4 report is the outstanding
question from Fabio – should the first recommendation include the points on the
community re-vote and the board removal option, at this time. Larry’s
recollection of the meeting in Cambridge is that the ATRT had asked Berkman to
look into the community re-vote option.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0cm'><span lang=EN-US
style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0cm'><span lang=EN-US
style='color:#1F497D'>The report does still contain a yellow highlighted
paragraph on page 36. We are ok with re-moving the highlight, but were
unsure why the highlight was there.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0cm'><span lang=EN-US
style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:0cm'><span lang=EN-US
style='color:#1F497D'>Once Fabio’s question is addressed we are ok with
publication of the report as it appears in the clean version of the document,
but would of course be happy to discuss further if there are still
issues/concerns.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Fiona<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, October 22, 2010 8:54 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline
Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] Draft - updated version<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>RT,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Attached is an updated version that
incorporates Fabio and Olivier’s edits and which also includes a proposed
Executive Summary and Recommendations at the beginning of the document.
WG4 is being sorted out separately per the earlier emails and will be
incorporated into this document when it is stable (along with a section in the
Executive Summary and Recommendations at the beginning of the document.).
The citations have been checked but please feel free to point out any
additional edits on that front as well.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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