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<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>RT,</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>I share Fabio's concern about the first recommendation of
WG4.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>I think the scope covered by this new committee is much too
broad.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>My suggestion (see enclosed documents with revision marks) is
to focus their work on the three mechanisms and in particular on the question
we raise about them.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT face=Arial><FONT
color=#0000ff size=2>Concerning the more global analysis of the appeal
mechanisms framework, I propose to include it ias a topic of the new regular
</FONT></FONT></SPAN><SPAN
style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"
lang=EN-US><FONT color=#0000ff size=2 face=Arial>internal
review </FONT><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><FONT color=#0000ff size=2
face=Arial>we recommend in the </FONT><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma" lang=EN-US><FONT
face=Arial><FONT color=#0000ff><FONT size=2><SPAN
class=868032315-23102010><STRONG>"</STRONG></SPAN>Overarching
Recommendation<SPAN class=868032315-23102010>"</SPAN></FONT></FONT></FONT>
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"
lang=EN-US><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma" lang=EN-US><FONT
color=#0000ff size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"
lang=EN-US><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma" lang=EN-US><FONT
color=#0000ff size=2 face=Arial>Best regards,</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"
lang=EN-US><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma" lang=EN-US><FONT
color=#0000ff size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN
style="FONT-FAMILY: Calibri; FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-fareast-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"
lang=EN-US><SPAN class=868032315-23102010><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma" lang=EN-US><FONT
color=#0000ff size=2 face=Arial>Olivier</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
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<HR tabIndex=-1>
<FONT size=2 face=Tahoma><B>De :</B> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <B>De la part de</B> Fiona
Alexander<BR><B>Envoyé :</B> vendredi 22 octobre 2010
17:26<BR><B>À :</B> 'briancute@afilias.info'; at-review@icann.org;
ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline Nolan';
rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<BR><B>Objet :</B> Re: [AT-Review] Draft -
updated version<BR></FONT><BR></DIV>
<DIV></DIV>
<DIV class=Section1>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d">Enclosed is both a redline
version as well as clean version of the document. They include the
following<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"
class=MsoListParagraph><![if !supportLists]><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d"><SPAN
style="mso-list: Ignore">-<SPAN
style="FONT: 7pt 'Times New Roman'">
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><![endif]><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d">Shifting the
overarching recommendation to the end of the list in the executive
summary.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"
class=MsoListParagraph><![if !supportLists]><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d"><SPAN
style="mso-list: Ignore">-<SPAN
style="FONT: 7pt 'Times New Roman'">
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><![endif]><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d">Inserting the date
options highlighted in yellow to the recommendations in the individual working
group reports. If folks are ok with this overall concept and approach,
then we would suggest removing the yellow highlights (of course retaining the
text) prior to publication.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"
class=MsoListParagraph><![if !supportLists]><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d"><SPAN
style="mso-list: Ignore">-<SPAN
style="FONT: 7pt 'Times New Roman'">
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><![endif]><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d">The inclusion in the
WG 2 report about the quorum needed for GAC decisions to respond to Manal’s
earlier request.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P style="TEXT-INDENT: -0.25in; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo1"
class=MsoListParagraph><![if !supportLists]><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d"><SPAN
style="mso-list: Ignore">-<SPAN
style="FONT: 7pt 'Times New Roman'">
</SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><![endif]><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d">Revised WG 4 report
with recommendations which we believe address the points made by Chris earlier.
Folks should review this section carefully to make sure it covers all
their points. Highlighted in green in both versions (clean and redline) in
the executive summary and the WG 4 report is the outstanding question from Fabio
– should the first recommendation include the points on the community re-vote
and the board removal option, at this time. Larry’s recollection of the
meeting in Cambridge is that the ATRT had asked Berkman to look into the
community re-vote option.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0in" class=MsoListParagraph><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P>
<P style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0in" class=MsoListParagraph><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">The report does still contain a yellow highlighted
paragraph on page 36. We are ok with re-moving the highlight, but were
unsure why the highlight was there.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0in" class=MsoListParagraph><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P>
<P style="MARGIN-LEFT: 0in" class=MsoListParagraph><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d">Once Fabio’s question is addressed we are ok with
publication of the report as it appears in the clean version of the document,
but would of course be happy to discuss further if there are still
issues/concerns.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoListParagraph><SPAN
style="COLOR: #1f497d"><o:p> </o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="COLOR: #1f497d">Fiona<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN
style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Tahoma','sans-serif'; FONT-SIZE: 10pt">From:</SPAN></B><SPAN
style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Tahoma','sans-serif'; FONT-SIZE: 10pt">
at-review-bounces@icann.org [mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <B>On Behalf Of
</B>Brian Cute<BR><B>Sent:</B> Friday, October 22, 2010 8:54 AM<BR><B>To:</B>
at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline Nolan';
rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<BR><B>Subject:</B> [AT-Review] Draft - updated
version<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P></DIV></DIV>
<P class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal>RT,<o:p></o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal>Attached is an updated version that incorporates Fabio and
Olivier’s edits and which also includes a proposed Executive Summary and
Recommendations at the beginning of the document. WG4 is being sorted out
separately per the earlier emails and will be incorporated into this document
when it is stable (along with a section in the Executive Summary and
Recommendations at the beginning of the document.). The citations have
been checked but please feel free to point out any additional edits on that
front as well.<o:p></o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal>Regards,<o:p></o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal>Brian<o:p></o:p></P></DIV></BODY></HTML>