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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Manal,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Thank you for reviewing the
document and making these edits. I believe (hope) that I captured all of them
in the final draft.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Manal Ismail
[mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, October 25, 2010 9:18 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> briancute@afilias.info; at-review@icann.org;
ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; Caroline Nolan; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] New draft WG4 for ATRT call<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Dear Brian ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>With respect to WG4 report,
there are 2 minor typos on page 5 of the attached version (which was the last
version you circulated but does not reflect the cc discussions), those are:
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span style='font-size:12.0pt'>" Midterm Review
of the review <u><span style='color:red'>of</span></u> the Joint Project Agreement
(JPA) " <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph>" Recommendation 2.8: Establish <span
style='color:red'>an<s>d</s></span> additional mechanism for the community
"<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Also regarding the draft master
that was already sent to the translation (I'm not sure if it's too late but I
believe it won't harm even for the final version), I have revised the document,
checking for any typos, unfortunately only pages 25 thu 38, starting WG2 report
.. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Please find attached with typos
marked in track changes .. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Kind Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>--Manal <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>
at-review-bounces@icann.org [mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf
Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, October 25, 2010 12:43 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline
Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] New draft WG4 for ATRT call<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>RT,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Attached is an updated version of WG4 for our call. It
includes:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]>The WG4 section of the Executive Summary with the
Recommendation language proposed by Manal;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]>The WG4 Findings section with edits proposed by Warren
and edits I proposed (which Olivier endorsed in his email today)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]>The WG4 Recommendation language proposed by Manal.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Brian<o:p></o:p></p>
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