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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Manal Ismail [mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, 25 October 2010 00:10<br>
<b>To:</b> briancute@afilias.info; Chris Disspain; at-review@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] Version 10 - CONCERNS<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Thanks Brian ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>A few remarks on
version 10:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>2 minor
typos on page 41:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:12.0pt'>"
Midterm Review of the review <u>of</u> the Joint Project Agreement (JPA) "
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US>" Recommendation 2.8: Establish
an<s>d</s> additional mechanism for the community "<span style='color:
#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>I was
going to propose, if not a hassle, that references of WG4 be added as footnotes
.. first of all for consistency and second cause I find it confusing having
interlaced references 1,2,….. then 61, 62, … .. but just noticed that not all
references are inserted in the body of the document .. so we can either
remove references 1-5 from page 38 or if no agreement leave everything as is
for the sake of time .. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>-<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>With
regards to the first para under WG4 recommendations, Fabio mentioned that he
will not be able to join the call so I'm afraid we might not be able to close
this discussion on the call .. I believe Chris wanted to revert to the old text
and Fabio was fine with the text only wanted to add the word 'three' to the
'review mechanisms' to further focus the review and make sure it does not sound
as if it was the RT's mandate .. I do not think Fabio was suggesting deleting
all what has been deleted unless I misunderstood the debate .. I thought we
were converging to the following:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>“The
ICANN Board should implement <span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>(as
soon as possible, but no later than INSERT DATE)</span> Recommendation 2.7 of
the 2009 Improving Institutional Confidence Implementation Plan which calls on
ICANN to seek input from a committee of independent experts on the
restructuring of the <u><span style='color:red'>three</span></u> review
mechanisms - the Independent Review Panel (IRP), the Reconsideration Process
and the Office of the Ombudsman. This should be a broad, comprehensive
assessment of the accountability and transparency of the <u><span
style='color:red'>three</span></u> existing mechanisms, their inter-relation,
if any (i.e., do the three processes provided for a graduated appeals process)
with a view towards reducing costs, issuing timelier decisions, and covering a
wider spectrum of issues in the IRP.</span><span style='color:#1F497D'> </span><span
lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Chris, Fabio
does the above text capture the concerns of both of you ?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Olivier, do
you mind reverting back to the old text?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Finally,
Warren, I believe you were in favour of the old text too, right?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>I know there
is still some disagreement on whether in principle the RT should further
investigate the review mechanisms but would this affect the current state of
the text ? I believe even Fabio mentioned that this would not impact the text
.. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Does this
capture the debate or have I overlooked other points of disagreement? <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Kind Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>--Manal <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, October 24, 2010 2:48 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Chris Disspain'; at-review@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [AT-Review] Version 10 - CONCERNS<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>RT,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Tomorrow I will send
the balance of the document to the translation team with the WG4 section (and
the WG4 references in the earlier portions of the document) removed. We
have a divergence of views on WG4 that must be resolved. I was hoping to
cancel the call on Monday but it appears we need to have that call for the
unique purpose of resolving the WG4 portion of the report. We will resolve the
WG4 portion and send it to the translation team so the document can be issued
to the public as a whole.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Chris Disspain [mailto:ceo@auda.org.au] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Saturday, October 23, 2010 8:09 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> briancute@afilias.info; at-review@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] Version 10 - CONCERNS<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I’m very concerned that the current amendments to the language
of the first paragraph of WG4 recommendations has been so watered down that the
recommendation is now ineffectual.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>The current draft language is:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>“The
ICANN Board should (as soon as possible, but no later than INSERT DATE) seek
input from a committee of independent experts on the restructuring of the three
review mechanisms - the Independent Review Panel (IRP), the Reconsideration
Process and the Office of the Ombudsman. This should, in particular,
address the following topics: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I believe that the paragraph is basically meaningless. It simply
asks the Board to seek input, and makes no reference to previous
recommendations to the Board which have not been followed. Further, the removal
of the references to the sort of review it should be (broad, comprehensive etc)
means that at no point in the recommendation as a whole is anything specific
said about the IRP. The sub-points to the recommendation provide specific input
re Ombudsman and reconsideration but nothing on IRP. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>The previous language was:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>“The
ICANN Board should implement <span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>(as
soon as possible, but no later than INSERT DATE)</span> Recommendation 2.7 of
the 2009 Improving Institutional Confidence Implementation Plan which calls on
ICANN to seek input from a committee of independent experts on the
restructuring of the review mechanisms - the Independent Review Panel (IRP),
the Reconsideration Process and the Office of the Ombudsman. This should
be a broad, comprehensive assessment of the accountability and transparency of
the existing mechanisms, their inter-relation, if any (i.e., do the three
processes provided for a graduated appeals process) with a view towards
reducing costs, issuing timelier decisions, and covering a wider spectrum of
issues in the IRP. <span style='background:lime;mso-highlight:lime'>The
utility of the Community Re-Vote and Board removal mechanisms should be
assessed and appropriate action taken. Were these issues adequately
discussed to include them?</span>”<span style='color:#7030A0'><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#7030A0'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>1.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I have no issue with the removal of the community re-vote and
Boars removal mechanisms sentence.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#7030A0'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I believe that it is the ATRT’s role to review what the Board is
doing re accountability and transparency and that on this basis it is
completely within our mandate to recommend that the Board carry out something
that has already been recommended. We have done this several times in the
report. We have recommended they follow the previous recommendation and pay
directors. We have recommended that they follow the recommendations of the
Board and Nom Com reviews. I do not understand why there is a problem
recommending they follow the recommendations of the PSC.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#7030A0'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>The additional part of the paragraph is critical, in my view, if
this recommendation is going to have any credibility. We have discussed at
length the issues that we have received feedback on in our public comment
process and in interviews. This is neatly encapsulated in the second sentence
of the previous language. Also the second sentence provides clear direction to
the Board on how comprehensive the assessment should be etc. This is also
critical.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Fabio’s comment:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
"Verdana","sans-serif"'>“The first recommendation of section 4 does not look
like a recommendation at all. It calls on somebody else to do the job
that, I am sure, the Community expected us to do. We have 101
reasons for being unable to make a substantial recommendation at this moment,
but it is necessary to give at least a word of explanation.
Otherwise we could be seriously criticised. As a minimum, in
the sixth line, instead of "of the existing mechanisms" we should be
saying "of the existing three mechanisms" (plus the "Community
re-vote", if we want to add it). Otherwise the current text looks
very much like our own mandate.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I do not agree with this. It is NOT the ATRT’s job to review the
IRP or the Ombudsman function. It is the ATRT’s job to review the performance
under the AoC. Therefore it is perfectly acceptable for us to recommend that
the Board follow the recommendations of a previous review (by the PSC) even if
that recommendation is itself that there should be a review. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I consider that the previous language is far more of a substantial
recommendation that the current language.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I consider that the current language will lead to us being
seriously criticised. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I have in my diary that we have a conference call set for 11.00
UTC on Monday. If that’s correct perhaps we can use that to debate this issue
if need be.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Cheers, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, 24 October 2010 04:26<br>
<b>To:</b> at-review@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] Version 10<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>RT,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Attached is the next version. The
following version will be our final version that is sent to the translation
team. If we do not reach agreement on WG4, I will sent the balance of the
document to the translation team to begin that process while we finalize WG4.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Edits in this version include:
Warren’s edits from his email yesterday and Olivier’s edits from today.
My view of WG4: we have represented that there is a divergence of opinion
on the ATRT regarding the issue of a binding appeals mechanism. Olivier’s
proposed edits are designed to address the concern that we are asking ICANN to
undertake a review when the ATRT should be doing a review and offering firm
recommendations. I have added some language in the Findings section of
WG4 that explains the ATRT view of the incomplete IIC work. Olivier’s
language narrows the WG4 recommendations to the specific issues that have been
identified by the ATRT with respect to the 3 appeals mechanisms. I
believe this is a balance approach to address the divergent views of the Review
Team and a way to make recommendations that call for concrete action as opposed
to an open review.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>At this point, the document needs to go forward
if we are to respect our intention to have the comment period close prior to
Cartagena. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Please submit your final view on the
proposed language. If there is serious dissent, dissenting opinions will
have to be drafted.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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