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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Great .. Thanks Warren ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>--Manal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>
wadelman@godaddy.com [mailto:wadelman@godaddy.com] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, October 25, 2010 2:25 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Manal Ismail<br>
<b>Cc:</b> briancute@afilias.info; Chris Disspain; at-review@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] Version 10 - CONCERNS<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'>Manal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:black'>Yes that is correct.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:black'>Warren<br>
<br>
Warren Adelman<br>
President & COO<br>
<a href="http://GoDaddy.com"><span style='color:windowtext'>GoDaddy.com</span></a><br>
<a href="mailto:warren@godaddy.com"><span style='color:windowtext'>warren@godaddy.com</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:black'>twitter: <a href="http://twitter.com/asocialcontract"><span
style='color:windowtext'>http://twitter.com/asocialcontract</span></a><br>
<a href="http://www.godaddy.com"><span style='color:windowtext'>http://www.godaddy.com</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>-------- Original Message
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Subject: Re: [AT-Review] Version 10 - CONCERNS<br>
From: "Manal Ismail" <<a href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg"><span
style='color:windowtext'>manal@tra.gov.eg</span></a>><br>
Date: Sun, October 24, 2010 6:09 am<br>
To: <<a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info"><span style='color:windowtext'>briancute@afilias.info</span></a>>,
"Chris Disspain" <<a href="mailto:ceo@auda.org.au"><span
style='color:windowtext'>ceo@auda.org.au</span></a>>, <br>
<<a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org"><span style='color:windowtext'>at-review@icann.org</span></a>><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Thanks
Brian ..</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>A
few remarks on version 10:</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black'><span
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>2 minor typos on page
41:</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>"
Midterm Review of the review <u>of</u> the Joint Project Agreement (JPA) "
</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'>" Recommendation 2.8: Establish an<s>d</s> additional
mechanism for the community "<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>I was going to
propose, if not a hassle, that references of WG4 be added as footnotes .. first
of all for consistency and second cause I find it confusing having interlaced
references 1,2,….. then 61, 62, … .. but just noticed that not all references
are inserted in the body of the document .. so we can either remove
references 1-5 from page 38 or if no agreement leave everything as is for the
sake of time .. </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:36.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black'><span
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span dir=LTR></span><span style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>With regards to the
first para under WG4 recommendations, Fabio mentioned that he will not be able
to join the call so I'm afraid we might not be able to close this discussion on
the call .. I believe Chris wanted to revert to the old text and Fabio was fine
with the text only wanted to add the word 'three' to the 'review mechanisms' to
further focus the review and make sure it does not sound as if it was the RT's
mandate .. I do not think Fabio was suggesting deleting all what has been
deleted unless I misunderstood the debate .. I thought we were converging to
the following:</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'>“The ICANN Board should implement <span style='background:yellow;
mso-highlight:yellow'>(as soon as possible, but no later than INSERT DATE)</span>
Recommendation 2.7 of the 2009 Improving Institutional Confidence
Implementation Plan which calls on ICANN to seek input from a committee of
independent experts on the restructuring of the </span><u><span lang=EN-GB
style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:red'>three</span></u><span
lang=EN-GB style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'> review mechanisms - the Independent Review Panel (IRP), the
Reconsideration Process and the Office of the Ombudsman. This should be a
broad, comprehensive assessment of the accountability and transparency of the </span><u><span
lang=EN-GB style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:red'>three</span></u><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:
"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> existing mechanisms, their inter-relation,
if any (i.e., do the three processes provided for a graduated appeals process)
with a view towards reducing costs, issuing timelier decisions, and covering a
wider spectrum of issues in the IRP.</span><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>"</span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Chris, Fabio does the above text capture the concerns of both of
you ?</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Olivier, do you mind reverting back to the old text?</span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Finally, Warren, I believe you were in favour of the old text
too, right?</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>I know there is still some disagreement on whether in principle
the RT should further investigate the review mechanisms but would this affect
the current state of the text ? I believe even Fabio mentioned that this would
not impact the text .. </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Does this capture the debate or have I overlooked other points
of disagreement? </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Kind Regards</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>--Manal </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";
color:black'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";
color:black'> <a href="mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org"><u><span
style='color:blue'>at-review-bounces@icann.org</span></u></a> [<a
href="mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org"><u><span style='color:blue'>mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org</span></u></a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, October 24, 2010 2:48 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Chris Disspain'; <a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org"><u><span
style='color:blue'>at-review@icann.org</span></u></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [AT-Review] Version 10 - CONCERNS</span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>RT,</span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Tomorrow
I will send the balance of the document to the translation team with the WG4
section (and the WG4 references in the earlier portions of the document)
removed. We have a divergence of views on WG4 that must be
resolved. I was hoping to cancel the call on Monday but it appears we
need to have that call for the unique purpose of resolving the WG4 portion of
the report. We will resolve the WG4 portion and send it to the translation team
so the document can be issued to the public as a whole.</span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Regards,</span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Brian</span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";
color:black'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";
color:black'> Chris Disspain [<a href="mailto:ceo@auda.org.au"><u><span
style='color:blue'>mailto:ceo@auda.org.au</span></u></a>] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Saturday, October 23, 2010 8:09 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:briancute@afilias.info"><u><span style='color:blue'>briancute@afilias.info</span></u></a>;
<a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org"><u><span style='color:blue'>at-review@icann.org</span></u></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] Version 10 - CONCERNS<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>All,</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I’m very concerned that the current amendments to the language
of the first paragraph of WG4 recommendations has been so watered down that the
recommendation is now ineffectual.</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>The current draft language is:</span><span style='font-family:
"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'>“The ICANN Board should (as soon as possible, but no later than
INSERT DATE) seek input from a committee of independent experts on the
restructuring of the three review mechanisms - the Independent Review Panel
(IRP), the Reconsideration Process and the Office of the Ombudsman. This
should, in particular, address the following topics: </span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'> </span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I believe that the paragraph is basically meaningless. It simply
asks the Board to seek input, and makes no reference to previous
recommendations to the Board which have not been followed. Further, the removal
of the references to the sort of review it should be (broad, comprehensive etc)
means that at no point in the recommendation as a whole is anything specific
said about the IRP. The sub-points to the recommendation provide specific input
re Ombudsman and reconsideration but nothing on IRP. </span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>The previous language was:</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'>“The ICANN Board should implement <span style='background:yellow;
mso-highlight:yellow'>(as soon as possible, but no later than INSERT DATE)</span>
Recommendation 2.7 of the 2009 Improving Institutional Confidence
Implementation Plan which calls on ICANN to seek input from a committee of
independent experts on the restructuring of the review mechanisms - the
Independent Review Panel (IRP), the Reconsideration Process and the Office of
the Ombudsman. This should be a broad, comprehensive assessment of the accountability
and transparency of the existing mechanisms, their inter-relation, if any
(i.e., do the three processes provided for a graduated appeals process) with a
view towards reducing costs, issuing timelier decisions, and covering a wider
spectrum of issues in the IRP. <span style='background:lime;mso-highlight:
lime'>The utility of the Community Re-Vote and Board removal mechanisms should
be assessed and appropriate action taken. Were these issues adequately
discussed to include them?</span>”</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<div style='margin-left:36.0pt'>
<ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=1 type=1>
<li class=MsoNormal style='color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4'><span
lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I have no issue with the removal of the community re-vote
and Boars removal mechanisms sentence.</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></li>
</ol>
</div>
<div style='margin-left:36.0pt'>
<ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=2 type=1>
<li class=MsoNormal style='color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4'><span
lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I believe that it is the ATRT’s role to review what the
Board is doing re accountability and transparency and that on this basis
it is completely within our mandate to recommend that the Board carry out
something that has already been recommended. We have done this several
times in the report. We have recommended they follow the previous
recommendation and pay directors. We have recommended that they follow the
recommendations of the Board and Nom Com reviews. I do not understand why
there is a problem recommending they follow the recommendations of the PSC.</span><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></li>
</ol>
</div>
<div style='margin-left:36.0pt'>
<ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=3 type=1>
<li class=MsoNormal style='color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4'><span
lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>The additional part of the paragraph is critical, in my
view, if this recommendation is going to have any credibility. We have
discussed at length the issues that we have received feedback on in our
public comment process and in interviews. This is neatly encapsulated in
the second sentence of the previous language. Also the second sentence
provides clear direction to the Board on how comprehensive the assessment
should be etc. This is also critical.</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></li>
</ol>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Fabio’s comment:</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'>“The first recommendation of section 4 does not look like a
recommendation at all. It calls on somebody else to do the job that, I am
sure, the Community expected us to do. We have 101 reasons for
being unable to make a substantial recommendation at this moment, but it is
necessary to give at least a word of explanation. Otherwise we
could be seriously criticised. As a minimum, in the sixth
line, instead of "of the existing mechanisms" we should be saying
"of the existing three mechanisms" (plus the "Community
re-vote", if we want to add it). Otherwise the current text looks
very much like our own mandate.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I do not agree with this. It is NOT the ATRT’s job to review the
IRP or the Ombudsman function. It is the ATRT’s job to review the performance
under the AoC. Therefore it is perfectly acceptable for us to recommend that
the Board follow the recommendations of a previous review (by the PSC) even if
that recommendation is itself that there should be a review. </span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I consider that the previous language is far more of a
substantial recommendation that the current language.</span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I consider that the current language will lead to us being
seriously criticised. </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>I have in my diary that we have a conference call set for 11.00
UTC on Monday. If that’s correct perhaps we can use that to debate this issue
if need be.</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Cheers, </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Chris Disspain </span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#FF8000'>|</span><span lang=EN-AU
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span
lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Chief Executive Officer</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'>E: <a href="mailto:ceo@auda.org.au" target="_blank"><u><span
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style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> </span><span
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lang=EN-AU style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:blue'><a
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style='font-size:10.0pt'>www.auda.org.au</span></u></a></span><span
style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#7030A0'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#FF9900'>Important Notice</span></b><b><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";
color:black'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";
color:black'> <a href="mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org"><u><span
style='color:blue'>at-review-bounces@icann.org</span></u></a> [<a
href="mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org"><u><span style='color:blue'>mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org</span></u></a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, 24 October 2010 04:26<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:at-review@icann.org"><u><span style='color:blue'>at-review@icann.org</span></u></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] Version 10</span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
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<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'> </span><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>RT,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Attached
is the next version. The following version will be our final version that
is sent to the translation team. If we do not reach agreement on WG4, I
will sent the balance of the document to the translation team to begin that
process while we finalize WG4.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Edits
in this version include: Warren’s edits from his email yesterday and
Olivier’s edits from today. My view of WG4: we have represented
that there is a divergence of opinion on the ATRT regarding the issue of a
binding appeals mechanism. Olivier’s proposed edits are designed to
address the concern that we are asking ICANN to undertake a review when the ATRT
should be doing a review and offering firm recommendations. I have added
some language in the Findings section of WG4 that explains the ATRT view of the
incomplete IIC work. Olivier’s language narrows the WG4 recommendations
to the specific issues that have been identified by the ATRT with respect to
the 3 appeals mechanisms. I believe this is a balance approach to address
the divergent views of the Review Team and a way to make recommendations that
call for concrete action as opposed to an open review.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>At
this point, the document needs to go forward if we are to respect our intention
to have the comment period close prior to Cartagena. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>Please
submit your final view on the proposed language. If there is serious
dissent, dissenting opinions will have to be drafted.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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