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<DIV dir=ltr align=left><FONT face=Arial><FONT color=#0000ff><FONT size=2><SPAN
class=530084508-25102010>RT,</SPAN></FONT></FONT></FONT></DIV>
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class=530084508-25102010></SPAN></FONT></FONT></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><FONT><FONT><SPAN class=530084508-25102010></SPAN><FONT
face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>I have <SPAN class=530084508-25102010>a
problem: Brian </SPAN>added <SPAN class=530084508-25102010>in v10
</SPAN>some language<SPAN class=530084508-25102010> I found very useful,
</SPAN>in the Findings section of WG4<SPAN class=530084508-25102010>. This
language </SPAN>explains the ATRT view of the incomplete IIC work.
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<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT face=Arial
color=#0000ff size=2>Among the edits, Brian proposed to add this
paragraph:</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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color=#0000ff size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black">The ATRT notes that work by ICANN and the
Community to address recommendations of the IIC was underway.<SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN>Public Comment had been received on
proposed bylaw changes but implementation work did not advance for reasons
stated in ICANN staff’s response to WG4’s Request for Information.<SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN>The ATRT recognizes that exploration by
ICANN staff and the Community of revised, new mechanisms could continue.<SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN>With respect to the AoC review, the ATRT
identified specific issues with respect to the review mechanisms that should be
addressed by ICANN in conjunction with a committee of independent
experts. <SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN></SPAN></P>
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style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"></SPAN></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"></SPAN><o:p><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT
face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>There were no comments on Brian's edits, the
comments focusing on the recommendation 1 of WG4. This text however disappeared
from the WG4 version Brian just sent us.</FONT></SPAN></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><o:p><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT
face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2></FONT></SPAN></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><o:p><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT
face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>I think that such an explanation in the finfings
section will be very hepful to understand the first recommendation of the WG4
and should be introduced in the report.</FONT></SPAN></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><o:p><SPAN
class=530084508-25102010></SPAN></o:p></SPAN><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><o:p><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT
face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2></FONT></SPAN></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><o:p><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT
face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>Concerning the formulation of the first
recommendation, I can live with the "old" one with tthe 2 "three", provided that
Brian edits to the findings are reintroduced.</FONT></SPAN></o:p></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><o:p><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT
face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2></FONT></SPAN></o:p></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN lang=EN-US
style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black"><o:p><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT
face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>I would also suggest to add the following
sentence at the end of the
recommendation:</FONT></SPAN></o:p></SPAN></P></SPAN><FONT face=Arial
color=#0000ff size=2></FONT>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><BR><FONT size=3><SPAN
class=530084508-25102010>The </SPAN>specific issues <SPAN
class=530084508-25102010>identified by the ATRT </SPAN>with respect to the
review mechanisms should be addressed <SPAN
class=530084508-25102010>in this context.</SPAN> <SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </SPAN></FONT></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><FONT size=3><SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"></SPAN></FONT> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT face=Arial
color=#0000ff size=2>Regards,</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT face=Arial
color=#0000ff size=2></FONT></SPAN></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><SPAN
style="mso-spacerun: yes"><SPAN class=530084508-25102010><FONT face=Arial
color=#0000ff size=2>Olivier</FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P></DIV>
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<FONT face=Tahoma size=2><B>De :</B> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <B>De la part de</B> Brian
Cute<BR><B>Envoyé :</B> lundi 25 octobre 2010 05:01<BR><B>À :</B>
at-review@icann.org; ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline Nolan';
rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<BR><B>Objet :</B> [AT-Review]
Call<BR></FONT><BR></DIV>
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<P class=MsoNormal>RT,<o:p></o:p></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal>Attached is the WG4 draft. I have inserted the text
Manal circulated earlier today for discussion on our call.<o:p></o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal>Regards,<o:p></o:p></P>
<P class=MsoNormal>Brian<o:p></o:p></P></DIV></BLOCKQUOTE></BODY></HTML>