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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Hi Brian,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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color:#7030A0'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Just a couple of things on WG4 recommendation as set out in the
exec summary (with consequential amendments in the main body of the document) to
be noted and picked up in the final report to the Board;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#7030A0'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>a)<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>The title of D in the exec summary should probably be &#8220;review
mechanism(s) for Board decisions&#8221; rather than &#8220;appeal mechanism(s)&#8230;.&#8221;.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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color:#7030A0'>The recommendation currently numbered 26 needs a little drafting
work and should probably be put at the end of the recommendations in D (ie as
number 29).<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:
"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> at-review-bounces@icann.org
[mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, 26 October 2010 03:01<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Olof Nordling'; 'Alice Jansen'; at-review@icann.org;
ugasser@cyber.law.harvard.edu; 'Caroline Nolan'; rfaris@cyber.law.harvard.edu<br>
<b>Cc:</b> denise.michel@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] ATRT translation request<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Olof and Alice,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Attached is the <u>complete</u> ATRT Request for Public
Comment document that needs to be translated.&nbsp; This attachment now
includes a section (d) in the Executive Summary titled <b><i><span
style='color:black'>D.&nbsp; Appeal mechanism(s) for Board decisions</span></i>
</b>and includes the Working Group 4 section that begins on page 39 of the
document. &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Denise Michel will provide you with links
for two documents that are referenced in footnotes #16, 34 and 81.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Also attached in the Berkman Center&#8217;s
Final Report.&nbsp; The Report is to be included in the document as Appendix A
and there is a cover sheet at the end of the ATRT Public Comment document for
that purpose.&nbsp; <u>PLEASE NOTE</u>: the Berkman Final Report can go out in
ENGLISH ONLY with the translated ATRT Public Comment document.&nbsp; We
recognize that the ATRT Public Comment document translation will be time
intensive and we do not want to risk delay in the issue date of the ATRT Public
Comment document by insisting on a multilingual Berkman Final Report appendix.&nbsp;
However, we would like to have multilingual versions of the Berkman Final
Report available as soon as possible. <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>As I mentioned, the ATRT wishes to have a
30 day public comment period that closes prior to the opening of the ICANN
meeting in Cartagena.&nbsp; If there is anything I can do to help expedite that
translation process, please let me know.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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