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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Chris,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>I am keeping that option in
reserve.&nbsp; If the translation is complete and the document issues no later than
next Wednesday, Nov. 3, the 30 day comment period will close prior to the opening
of the ICANN meeting (albeit the day prior when people are getting on
airplanes).&nbsp; <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>I am monitoring the progress of
the translation and, if our target date looks to be at risk, we will release
the English only version.&nbsp; Given the fact that our first request for Public
Comments went out in English-only followed by U.N. languages, I would strongly
prefer to have the multilingual version go out together.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Brian<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Chris Disspain
[mailto:ceo@auda.org.au] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, October 27, 2010 12:11 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> briancute@afilias.info; at-review@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [AT-Review] Minor edits<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Brian,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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color:#7030A0'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Given that we don&#8217;t know how long the translations will take,
should we proceed to publish the draft report in English asap?<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Chris Disspain </span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#FF8000'>|</span><span lang=EN-AU
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>&nbsp;</span><span
lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>Chief Executive Officer</span><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:
10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>.au Domain Administration Ltd</span><span lang=EN-AU
style='color:#7030A0'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'><a href="tel:1300%20732%20929"><span style='color:#7030A0;
text-decoration:none'>T: 1300 732 929</span></a></span><span lang=EN-AU
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black'>&nbsp;</span><span
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href="tel:03%208341%204112"><span style='color:#7030A0;text-decoration:none'>F:
03 8341 4112</span></a></span><span lang=EN-AU style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
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color:#7030A0'>W:</span><span lang=EN-AU style='color:blue'><a
href="http://www.auda.org.au/" target="_blank" title="http://www.auda.org.au"><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>www.auda.org.au</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-AU style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";
color:#7030A0'>auDA - The Australian Domain Name Administrator</span><span
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>
at-review-bounces@icann.org [mailto:at-review-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf
Of </b>Brian Cute<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, 26 October 2010 12:47<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Olof Nordling'; 'Alice Jansen'; at-review@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [AT-Review] Minor edits<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>

<p class=MsoNormal>Olof and Alice,<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal>There are minor edits on pages 5 and 46 of the document for
the translation team.&nbsp; Footnotes from Denise are pending.<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal>Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal>Brian<o:p></o:p></p>

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