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style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'>All,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'>My red line is attached.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'>I have made amendments to the exec summary, some consequent amendments to the recommendations in the body of the report and to Appendices A and B.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'>I will, over the next few days, work on adding public comment paragraphs to both sections of the Report of WG 1.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'>Olivier</span></b><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'>, if you are able to provide me with a summary of on line and Cartagena public comment on the WG1 recommendations that would be most helpful.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#595959'>Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p 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