[atrt2] Template 12-16, 35 & 36

Brian Cute bcute at pir.org
Thu Oct 3 23:48:36 UTC 2013


Happy that you are comfortable.  Paul deserves the credit.  I will check the 2 items below for the final draft and be sure that are addressed.  Have you heard from Carlos on this?  Is he likewise comfortable?

Larisa and Alice, please put this in the single report template and I will do the final edits shortly.


From: Avri Doria <avri at ella.com<mailto:avri at ella.com>>
Date: Thu, 3 Oct 2013 18:08:24 -0400
To: "ATRT2 (atrt2 at icann.org<mailto:atrt2 at icann.org>)" <atrt2 at icann.org<mailto:atrt2 at icann.org>>
Subject: Re: [atrt2] Template 12-16, 35 & 36


I beleive you have worked a miracle. it is much improved.  Thanks;

I went through all of the edits.

- accepted all the formatting ones
- accepted all of the movement of text
- accepted most all of the wording changes.
- accepted the deletion where I had written the text
- did not feel right deleting some of the sections where the text was not originally mine, so left that for Carlos to check out.

There are several areas where I had questions:

- On the second page we make reference to a Staff work item that we were not able to locate.  This reference was deleted.  Wanted to keep it in to make sure we did not forget to follow up.  Am fine with the reference being in a comment instead of in-line text.

- On page 8  you deleted the reference to by-laws that might be affected by the recommendations.  I thought we needed that reference.

But as I say, a miracle.  I have attached a version with most all of the changes accepted, but with others left pending for Carlos.


On 3 Oct 2013, at 12:12, Brian Cute wrote:

> Carlos and Avri,
> Please see the attached revision of your draft Template 12-16, 35 & 36.  I believe this tracks to the version just prior to the updated version you last sent Avri.  Lots of edits, again with a view toward consistency and structure and not intended to substantively alter your direction or conclusions.  Please take a careful read and further iterate the document to a final state.  If you wish to discuss, let me know.  Thank you.
> Best,
> Brian
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