[atrt2] Final draft Report
Larisa B. Gurnick
larisa.gurnick at icann.org
Sat Oct 12 13:48:08 UTC 2013
Re: executive summary, please use the document that I circulated to the Review Team last night and make your edits in redlined mode. I will highlight the changes for translators first thing on Monday.
Re: full document, please include all the changes you wish and send us your revised draft by Monday. Staff will not take any further action on the Draft Report until then.
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On Oct 12, 2013, at 5:57 AM, "Brian Cute" <bcute at pir.org<mailto:bcute at pir.org>> wrote:
Note that there is overlap between Recommendation 10 and "New" Recommendation 11. We need to correct this before translation of the Executive Summary is completed. I will call Alan to make an accurate correction as he is the author and will send the corrected version of the Executive Summary back to you. On another note, there are some edits that came in at the end of the day yesterday. Would I have time to incorporate those edits (in the body of the Report) this weekend and send that updated version of the Report to you. If the answer is "no," that is O.K. This is a draft and we will keep and incorporate edits received into the Final Report.
From: Brian Cute <bcute at pir.org<mailto:bcute at pir.org>>
Date: Fri, 11 Oct 2013 17:44:54 -0400
To: "Larisa B. Gurnick" <larisa.gurnick at icann.org<mailto:larisa.gurnick at icann.org>>, Charla Shambley <charla.shambley at icann.org<mailto:charla.shambley at icann.org>>, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen at icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen at icann.org>>
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Subject: Final draft Report
Larisa, Charla and Alice,
Attached is the final draft version of the Report for publication. Please note: the numbering system in the document needs to be adjusted. My apologies but that was the last piece that I could not get to. Would you kindly be able to correct the numbering as it corresponds to the Table of Contents and the text in the body of the Report. Also, would you kindly copy into Appendix A the ICC Report and into Appendix B, Michael and Alan's WHOIS RT report. Once those pieces are copied in, the Report should be complete. Otherwise, should you see any glaring drafting errors or omissions in the Report (not substantive/analytical), please contact me to discuss. Thank you very much.
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