[atrt2] Edits post meeting of Friday the 13th.

Avri Doria avri at acm.org
Sun Dec 15 19:23:18 UTC 2013


minor updates to requirements - no content changes, sentenc estructue 
and typos.


On 15-Dec-13 08:27, Avri Doria wrote:
> Hi,
> I made my changes in the file indicated by staff on Friday.  I took some
> of the Staff recommended language, but in some cases either left the
> original language or produced new language that tried to take concerns
> brought up by the Staff and community comment into account.
> I have not yet gone back and updated the template based sections based
> on community comments. After finishing the reading will go back and do
> that.
> avri
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