[atrt2] ATRT2 Final Report - Draft#2 For Your Review

Lise Fuhr lise.fuhr at difo.dk
Fri Dec 20 20:31:48 UTC 2013

Hi Larisa,


I have a few remarks. 


I am not happy with the changes Sabra made on page 12 to recommendation
12.4. I think the new wording changes the recommendation too much. I
furthermore don’t understand why the review team suddenly is a part of the
recommendation. The changes are not in the same recommendation on page 81. I
prefer the “original” version on page 81.


At page 79 there is a comment from [s36] about “whose comments is this?”


The section referred to is a part of the section above and is a part of the
RySG comments to recommendation 12.4.


I hope this is understandable.

Have a nice weekend – and a Merry Christmas/holidays





Fra: atrt2-bounces at icann.org [mailto:atrt2-bounces at icann.org] På vegne af
Larisa B. Gurnick
Sendt: 20. december 2013 08:30
Til: ATRT2 (atrt2 at icann.org)
Emne: [atrt2] ATRT2 Final Report - Draft#2 For Your Review


Dear Review Team members,


Attached are documents comprising ATRT2 Final Report – Draft #2.  Please
review these documents and provide staff with your final edits by 23 UTC on
Friday, 20 December. 

Staff will circulate ATRT2 Final Report – Draft #3 on Monday 23 December. 


Appendix B has not changed since the Draft Report.  Appendix C reflects all
the submitted changes.  Appendix D is new.  


Staff made every effort to reflect your intended changes consistently and
accurately, and the quality control effort is still continuing.  However,
due to the volume of changes, please take care to check your portions of the
document to ensure accuracy.  Formatting and table of contents will be
updated in the next draft.


As a reminder, ICANN will be closed for the holidays from noon on 24
December through 1 January, and the editor that has been engaged to assist
with the Final Report will not be available after 23 December.  

Staff will be available to assist with any last minute edits upon return on
2 January.  Staff will submit the final report for translation  and
coordinate the posting on the web site as soon as ATRT2 confirms the Final
Report documents after the holidays.


Best regards,


Larisa B. Gurnick

Consultant/Senior Director, Organizational Reviews

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)

larisa.gurnick at icann.org

310 383-8995


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