[atrt2] Edits to ATRT2 Final Report
brianacute at gmail.com
Sun Dec 22 14:02:06 UTC 2013
Thanks for pointing out the inconsistency Olivier. Larisa, please ask the
editor to make a global edit on "the ATRT2" and "ATRT2" as Olivier
suggests. Thank you.
On Saturday, December 21, 2013, Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond wrote:
> Dear Brian,
> thanks for the adding of the text re: observations - that eases my
> concerns and I hope that Board members & the community will read the Report
> in full.
> I do note however that you sometimes use "ATRT2" and sometimes use "the
> ATRT2" in your text. In replacing the acronym with the full words, I
> believe that in the vast majority of cases, one would refer to "the ATRT2".
> Please be so kind to have this checked. Ditto for other acronyms such as
> Kind regards,
> On 20/12/2013 23:18, Brian Cute wrote:
> In the current version of the Final Report, the following statement
> appears at the top of page 3: "ATRT2 believes that these Recommendations
> are important and, to the extent accepted by the Board, should be treated
> as a strategic priority. To that end, ICANN should create an
> implementation plan and publish it to the Community." Please add the
> following text directly after that sentence as a continuation of the
> "ATRT2 wishes to emphasize that the observations appearing in ATRT2's
> assessments and elsewhere in the body of the Report should be duly
> considered by the Board and afforded all due weight in ongoing and future
> implementation efforts."
> Also, please create an Appendix for the ATRT2's Observations on the
> Review Process document. PLEASE NOTE, there are data points that need to
> be added to the ATRT2 Observations document -- # of conference calls held
> by ATRT2, # of face to face meetings etc. I am not sure that I have the
> master "Observations" document but I believe ATRT2 had 16 conference calls
> and 7 face to face meetings. Would you kindly add that data to the
> document. The attached document which is a description of audit techniques
> being under consideration by the Structural Improvements Committee should
> be added to the Observations document as part of the record of our
> discussions. As a lead in to the Audit Framework documents, please add the
> following text:
> "In discussing how to improve the AoC Review process going forward,
> ATRT2 also considered the work of the ICANN Structural Improvements
> Committee on Institutional Reviews. The ATRT2 notes that the AoC Reviews
> are distinct and different from the ICANN Institutional Reviews. At the
> same time, AoC Review Teams and the Board should consider the ATRT2's
> Observations and a range of techniques to improve the AoC Review processes.
> The following document contains a number of techniques considered by the
> Structural Improvement Committee for consideration."
> Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond, PhDhttp://www.gih.com/ocl.html
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