<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>Thank you Alan!</div><div><br></div><div>Any news in the letter to Governments?</div><div><br></div><div>Carlos Raul <br><br>Sent from my iPhone</div><div><br>On 01/07/2013, at 05:14, Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>
Forgot to add:<br><br>
Staff is coordinating the following distribution to take place on Monday
1 July by end of business:<br>
- Direct emails to the firms that responded to ATRT 1 RFP<br>
- Posting on the ICANN web site<br>
- Press release for broad distribution<br><br>
The list of ATRT1 bidders can be found at
<a href="http://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/rfp-respondents-evaluation-19jun10-en.pdf">
http://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/rfp-respondents-evaluation-19jun10-en.pdf</a>
.<br><br>
The scoring system used by ATRT for their Independant Expert can be found
at
<a href="http://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/proposals-evaluation-scoring-sheet-19jun10-en.pdf" eudora="autourl">
http://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/proposals-evaluation-scoring-sheet-19jun10-en.pdf</a>
. We will quickly need to put one together for our evaluation of RFP
repsonses.<br><br>
Alan<br><br>
<br><br>
<br>
At 30/06/2013 10:38 PM, Alan Greenberg wrote:<br>
<blockquote type="cite" class="cite" cite="">Thanks to Avri for incorporating
the suggestions to date. I think that all have been included except for
Demi's last suggestion of adding the task of identifying comparable MS
processes. I tried adding that, but it made for a very awkward sentence,
and it is already implied, since the comparison cannot be done without
first identifying what to compare to (thanks to Avri for pointing that
out).<br><br>
I did some punctuation cleanup, and have one other suggestion for a
change, removing the word "encouraging" from "...whether
the PDP process could be strengthened by encouraging the submission of
views and advice from the GAC whether the PDP process could be
strengthened by encouraging the submission of views and advice from the
GAC..." since it is not the encouraging that would not change
anything, but the actual submission. That change is redlined in the
version attached.<br><br>
Larisa has also made some administrative changes.<br><br>
Unless I hear anything further (about that last changes or anything else
in the RFP), I will send give staff the go-ahead to issue the RFP at
16:00 UTC on Monday (9 am PST and 2 hours after the end of our call with
the CSG). <br><br>
Alan<br><br>
At 30/06/2013 05:51 PM, Avri Doria wrote:<br>
<blockquote type="cite" class="cite" cite=""><font size="2">I move one bullet,
but could not come up with wording for his Identify clause. <br>
Seems like one would have to identify them before benchmarking against
them.<br><br>
avri<br><br>
<br><br>
<br>
On 30 Jun 2013, at 12:41, Avri Doria wrote:<br><br>
> Hi,<br>
> <br>
> Anyone want to take them on?<br>
> <br>
> If so, may I pass the editor token to you?<br>
> <br>
> avri<br>
> <br>
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