<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;">Larisa,<div><br></div><div>The edits look fine to me, however I gather Olivier has some concern regarding the write up of SSR Rec 27:</div><div><br></div><div>"Recommendation 27 review is too complacent."</div><div><br></div><div>as well as a view that the commentary for that recommendation does not reflect the ALAC statement. I'm happy to revise, but am unsure how to address his concerns without additional information.</div><div><br></div><div>Regards,</div><div>-drc</div><div><br></div><div><div><div>On Dec 19, 2013, at 8:25 AM, Larisa B. Gurnick <<a href="mailto:larisa.gurnick@icann.org">larisa.gurnick@icann.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"><meta name="Generator" content="Microsoft Word 14 (filtered medium)"><style><!--
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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal">David,<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">Please review the proposed edits to Appendix C – SSR Review Implementation and provide staff with your final edits by 16 UTC on Friday, 20 December.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">Thank you,<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><i>Larisa B. Gurnick<o:p></o:p></i></b></p><p class="MsoNormal">Consultant/Senior Director, Organizational Reviews<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)</span><span style=""><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><a href="mailto:larisa.gurnick@icann.org">larisa.gurnick@icann.org</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">310 383-8995<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p></div></div><span><Appendix C - SSR Assessment 19 Dec.docx></span></blockquote></div><br></div></body></html>