<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto"><div>Lise,</div><div><br></div><div>I have added footnotes with quotes from public comments to the report as well as a few edits. I intended those edits to add support to the recommendations. If you are uncomfortable with the impact on the recommendations you drafted, by all means fell free to change th to reflect the intent of your draft.</div><div><br></div><div>Beat,</div><div>Brian</div><div><br>Sent from my iPhone</div><div><br>On Dec 20, 2013, at 3:31 PM, "Lise Fuhr" <<a href="mailto:lise.fuhr@difo.dk">lise.fuhr@difo.dk</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1"><meta name="Generator" content="Microsoft Word 14 (filtered medium)"><style><!--
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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--><div class="WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Hi Larisa,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">I have a few remarks. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">I am not happy with the changes Sabra made on page 12 to recommendation 12.4. I think the new wording changes the recommendation too much. I furthermore don’t understand why the review team suddenly is a part of the recommendation. The changes are not in the same recommendation on page 81. I prefer the “original” version on page 81.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">At page 79 there is a comment from [s36] about “whose comments is this?”<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">The section referred to is a part of the section above and is a part of the RySG comments to recommendation 12.4.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">I hope this is understandable.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">Have a nice weekend – and a Merry Christmas/holidays<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="color:#1F497D">Lise<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm"><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">Fra:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> <a href="mailto:atrt2-bounces@icann.org">atrt2-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:atrt2-bounces@icann.org">mailto:atrt2-bounces@icann.org</a>] <b>På vegne af </b>Larisa B. Gurnick<br><b>Sendt:</b> 20. december 2013 08:30<br><b>Til:</b> ATRT2 (<a href="mailto:atrt2@icann.org">atrt2@icann.org</a>)<br><b>Emne:</b> [atrt2] ATRT2 Final Report - Draft#2 For Your Review<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Dear Review Team members,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Attached are documents comprising ATRT2 Final Report – Draft #2<b>. <u>Please review these documents and provide staff with your final edits by 23 UTC on Friday, 20 December</u></b><u>.</u> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Staff will circulate ATRT2 Final Report – Draft #3 on Monday 23 December. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Appendix B has not changed since the Draft Report. Appendix C reflects all the submitted changes. Appendix D is new. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Staff made every effort to reflect your intended changes consistently and accurately, and the quality control effort is still continuing. However, due to the volume of changes, please take care to check your portions of the document to ensure accuracy. Formatting and table of contents will be updated in the next draft.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">As a reminder, ICANN will be closed for the holidays from noon on 24 December through 1 January, and the editor that has been engaged to assist with the Final Report will not be available after 23 December. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Staff will be available to assist with any last minute edits upon return on 2 January. Staff will submit the final report for translation and coordinate the posting on the web site as soon as ATRT2 confirms the Final Report documents after the holidays.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang="EN-US">Larisa B. Gurnick<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Consultant/Senior Director, Organizational Reviews<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><a href="mailto:larisa.gurnick@icann.org">larisa.gurnick@icann.org</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">310 383-8995<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div></div></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><div><span>_______________________________________________</span><br><span>atrt2 mailing list</span><br><span><a href="mailto:atrt2@icann.org">atrt2@icann.org</a></span><br><span><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/atrt2">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/atrt2</a></span><br></div></blockquote></body></html>