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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>In Mike&#8217;s posting of the Draft BC
comments, he asked a question of me in the section__. &nbsp;My response is
noted below.&nbsp; You will see I am looking for some assistance in refining
the language that gets the message across more clearly.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><b><font size=3 color=black face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";color:black;font-weight:
bold'>Revised Comparative Evaluation Scoring <o:p></o:p></span></font></b></p>

<h2 align=left style='text-align:left'><b><i><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:
"Times New Roman";color:black;font-weight:normal;font-style:normal'>The
Business Constituency welcomes the opportunity to comment on Draft Applicant
Guidebook v3 and draws ICANN&#8217;s attention to an inequity in the
comparative evaluation scoring.<o:p></o:p></span></font></i></b></h2>

<h2 align=left style='text-align:left'><b><i><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span lang=EN-GB style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:
"Times New Roman";color:black'>Background<o:p></o:p></span></font></i></b></h2>

<p class=MsoNormal style='text-autospace:none'><font size=3 color=black
face="Times New Roman"><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman";
color:black'>The Expressions of Interest documentation created by ICANN to
recruit evaluators clearly states that<u> the comparative evaluation section
will require a high degree of subjectivity</u>; but, at the same time, <u>ICANN
does not allow for any subjectivity failure on the part of the reviewer</u>.&nbsp;
[Ron, please elaborate on this, I have read it a couple times, edited below,
and still do not see enough logic in it.&nbsp; Is it typical for independent
reviews to have lower thresholds for passing, to account for
subjectivity?&nbsp; Can we point to some examples?] </span></font><font
color=purple face=Arial><span style='font-family:Arial;color:purple'>What I am
trying to get at, but having difficulty expressing is the following:&nbsp; An
individual is tasked with doing what all agree is a highly subjective review.&nbsp;
By tight scoring, ICANN expects that this individual will do a &#8216;perfect&#8217;
job determining highly subjective positions?&nbsp; What if he has a strong
argument with his wife that day or he is in ill health &#8211; in either case
not thinking clearly &#8211; but he nonetheless takes &#8216;highly
subjective&#8217; decisions that day.&nbsp; Should we deem fair a system that
does not allow one point of failure for the individual doing the review? Is it
not possible that he may not be thinking 100% clearly? &nbsp;By experience, I
know that individuals, despite the facts being otherwise, may make a decision
completely contrary to what all others agree is so.&nbsp; With only two points
of failure, i.e., a 87% score to prove nexus, the window of subjective scoring is
too tight and unfair to applicants. &nbsp;Three points of failure at least allows
for the reviewer to have a &#8216;bad day&#8217; and ensure that that &#8216;bad
day&#8217; does not crush an applicant that otherwise proves nexus in every
way. &nbsp;We need a larger window.&nbsp; Thirteen of sixteen is 81%.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>Thanks in advance to anyone who can add
the needed clarity.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>RA<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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12.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

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<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=2 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
11.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>Ronald N. Andruff<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=2 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
11.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>RNA Partners, Inc.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=2 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
11.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>220 <st1:Street w:st="on"><st1:address
 w:st="on">Fifth Avenue</st1:address></st1:Street>, 20th floor<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on"><font size=2
  color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
  color:blue'>New York</span></font></st1:City><font size=2 color=blue
 face=Arial><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>, <st1:State
 w:st="on">New York</st1:State> <st1:PostalCode w:st="on">10001</st1:PostalCode></span></font></st1:place><font
size=2 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:blue'><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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11.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'><a href="http://www.rnapartners.com">www.rnapartners.com</a>
<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=2 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
11.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>V: +1 212 481 2820 x 11<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoAutoSig><font size=2 color=blue face=Arial><span style='font-size:
11.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:blue'>F:&nbsp; +1 212 481 2859 <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><b><font size=2 face=Tahoma><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Tahoma;font-weight:bold'>From:</span></font></b><font size=2
face=Tahoma><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma'> <st1:PersonName
w:st="on">owner-bc-gnso@icann.org</st1:PersonName> [mailto:<st1:PersonName
w:st="on">owner-bc-gnso@icann.org</st1:PersonName>] <b><span style='font-weight:
bold'>On Behalf Of </span></b>Mike Rodenbaugh<br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>Sent:</span></b> 2009-11-12 13:51<br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>To:</span></b> <st1:PersonName w:st="on">'</st1:PersonName>bc
- GNSO list<st1:PersonName w:st="on">'</st1:PersonName><br>
<b><span style='font-weight:bold'>Subject:</span></b> [bc-gnso] <st1:place
w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">DRAFT</st1:City> <st1:State w:st="on">BC</st1:State></st1:place>
Comments re New gTLD DAG v.3</span></font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman"'><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Hi
all,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>With
many thanks to Ron Andruff, David Fares and Zahid Jamil for their inputs thus
far, here is a DRAFT of BC comments to be submitted by the comment deadline of
Nov. 22 if possible.&nbsp; Please indicate any objections, questions, suggested
edits or adds, etc. ASAP.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Mike<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Mike
Rodenbaugh<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>RODENBAUGH
LAW<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><st1:Street w:st="on"><st1:address w:st="on"><font size=2
  face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>548 Market Street</span></font></st1:address></st1:Street><o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on"><font size=2
  face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>San Francisco</span></font></st1:City>,
 <st1:State w:st="on">CA</st1:State>&nbsp; <st1:PostalCode w:st="on">94104</st1:PostalCode></st1:place><o:p></o:p></p>

<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><a
href="http://service.ringcentral.com/ringme/callback.asp?mbid=57178438,0,&amp;referer=http://rodenbaugh.com/contact">(415)
738-8087</a><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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size=2 face=Calibri><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><a
href="http://rodenbaugh.com/">http://rodenbaugh.com</a><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

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