<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">hi all,<div><br></div><div>i had a go at marking up Adam's draft. </div><div><br></div><div>i'm walking us back just a bit on overall tone, and i've refined/narrowed a few points to get them a little more in line with the bottom-up approach. i don't feel like i've dramatically changed the thrust of the document, but others may disagree. :-)</div><div><br></div><div>mikey</div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html>