<div dir="ltr">All--<div><br><div><div style="font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">Please see some suggested edits from Google on the attached document. While there is some amount of reorganizing, I believe our suggested edits preserve the points made in the original document while making some improvements for flow and clarity. I have also suggested deviation from ICANN's proposed submission form where adhering to it obscured the content of our comments. </div>
<div style="font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><br></div><div style="font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">Cheers, </div><div style="font-family:arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px">Aparna</div></div></div><div class="gmail_extra">
<br clear="all"><div><div dir="ltr">Aparna Sridhar<div>Counsel</div><div>Google Inc.</div><div>1101 New York Avenue N.W.</div><div>Second Floor</div><div>Washington, DC 20005</div><div>tel: 202.346.12<span>61</span></div>
<div>e-mail: <a href="mailto:aparnasridhar@google.com" target="_blank">aparnasridhar@google.com</a></div></div></div>
<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sat, Jan 18, 2014 at 12:51 PM, Marilyn Cade <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:marilynscade@hotmail.com" target="_blank">marilynscade@hotmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<div><div dir="ltr">I will draft something for ICANN mission/lingage to I-GOV. I wanted to hear from CCWG and 1NET first, and that happened this week.<div><br></div><div>I also moved this to bc-private just temporarily. </div>
<div><br></div><div>David, Aparna, Philip, and I were on CCWG and David, Aparna, and others from business COMMUNITY, were on relevant calls last week. I will send a short assessment over week end. </div><div><br></div><div>
If members want public access to our discussions, we can move back to public list, but I didn't want to do that, without full consideration from BC members.</div><div><br></div><div>M<br><br><div><hr>From: <a href="mailto:sdelbianco@netchoice.org" target="_blank">sdelbianco@netchoice.org</a><br>
To: <a href="mailto:bc-gnso@icann.org" target="_blank">bc-gnso@icann.org</a><br>CC: <a href="mailto:tim@domaintools.com" target="_blank">tim@domaintools.com</a>; <a href="mailto:chris@andalucia.com" target="_blank">chris@andalucia.com</a><br>
Subject: [bc-gnso] FOR REVIEW: BC comment on ICANN's focus for 5-year strategic plan<br>Date: Sat, 18 Jan 2014 17:27:45 +0000<div><div class="h5"><br><br>
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<div>Attached is the current draft BC comment on ICANN’s Vision, Mission & Focus for 5-year Strategic Plan, which came out of last summer’s "brainstorming" by board, community and staff. (<a href="http://www.icann.org/en/about/planning/strategic-engagement/focus-areas-29oct13-en.pdf" target="_blank">link</a>)</div>
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<div>Tim Chen and Chris Chaplow led drafting of the BC comment, with help from Martin Sutton, Marilyn Cade, and Andrew Mack.</div>
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<div>Comments close 31-Jan, so today begins our 14-day review period.</div>
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<div>We need draft comments for Focus Area V: Defining role clarity for ICANN in the Internet governance ecosystem. </div>
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<div>Yesterday I shared my views about ICANN limiting its mission and avoiding entanglements in the broader I-Gov debate. If no BC members contribute text for Area V, then I can draft something next week.</div>
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<div>Please REPLY ALL with edits (TRACK CHANGES)as soon as possible, since the comment deadline is 31-Jan-2014.</div>
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<div>Thanks again to Tim and Chris for taking the lead on this.</div>
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