<div dir="ltr">Dear Chris, <div><br>The original draft was the one that struck references to the public interest in the vision statement and noted that public interest "will be another layer for the community/staff to remember and adhere to." This is one example but there are a couple others. I am not sure restoring these points, which express skepticism about ICANN's public interest mission, would help address David's concerns. </div>
<div><br>As I said, I was trying to make some edits for clarity, but I think what you and David are suggesting is an openness to new content. While I could take a crack at that, I think that it would be better coming from either David or you. I don't want to misrepresent what either of you is thinking. </div>
<div><br></div><div>Cheers, </div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div dir="ltr">Aparna Sridhar<div>Counsel</div><div>Google Inc.</div><div>1101 New York Avenue N.W.</div><div>Second Floor</div><div>Washington, DC 20005</div>
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<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jan 30, 2014 at 8:43 AM, Chris Chaplow <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:chris@andalucia.com" target="_blank">chris@andalucia.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<div lang="ES" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Members,<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal">
<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Thanks Aparna for making updates to the document.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">I am fine to accept the changes and in particular for the sections that I authored. I would ask that Tim Cheng, Andrew Mack and Martin Sutton also advise of their respective sections. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">David, I am not aware of any existing BC position on the issue or scope of Public interest. Your suggestion that we recognize that public interest issues within the context of ICANN’s mandate are within its purview, seems a reasonable approach. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">If Aparna can restore the public interest points within this, and post back to the list, it would be a step forward. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">We need to submit the final version on the 31<sup>st</sup> January.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">De:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> <a href="mailto:owner-bc-gnso@icann.org" target="_blank">owner-bc-gnso@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:owner-bc-gnso@icann.org" target="_blank">owner-bc-gnso@icann.org</a>] <b>En nombre de </b>Aparna Sridhar</span></p>
<div class="im"><br><b>Enviado el:</b> lunes, 27 de enero de 2014 19:13<br><b>Para:</b> Marilyn Cade<br></div><b>CC:</b> Steve Delbianco; bc - GNSO list; Chen, Tim; Chris at Andalucia<br><b>Asunto:</b> Re: [bc-gnso] FOR REVIEW: BC comment on ICANN's focus for 5-year strategic plan<u></u><u></u><p>
</p></div><div><div class="h5"><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><div><p class="MsoNormal">All--<u></u><u></u></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Please see some suggested edits from Google on the attached document. While there is some amount of reorganizing, I believe our suggested edits preserve the points made in the original document while making some improvements for flow and clarity. I have also suggested deviation from ICANN's proposed submission form where adhering to it obscured the content of our comments. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
</div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""><u></u> <u></u></span></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Cheers, <u></u><u></u></span></p>
</div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Aparna<u></u><u></u></span></p></div></div></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><br clear="all"><u></u><u></u></p>
<div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Aparna Sridhar<u></u><u></u></p><div><p class="MsoNormal">Counsel<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Google Inc.<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">1101 New York Avenue N.W.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Second Floor<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Washington, DC 20005<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">tel: <a href="tel:202.346.1261" value="+12023461261" target="_blank">202.346.1261</a><u></u><u></u></p>
</div><div><p class="MsoNormal">e-mail: <a href="mailto:aparnasridhar@google.com" target="_blank">aparnasridhar@google.com</a><u></u><u></u></p></div></div></div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></p>
<div><p class="MsoNormal">On Sat, Jan 18, 2014 at 12:51 PM, Marilyn Cade <<a href="mailto:marilynscade@hotmail.com" target="_blank">marilynscade@hotmail.com</a>> wrote:<u></u><u></u></p><div><div><p class="MsoNormal">
I will draft something for ICANN mission/lingage to I-GOV. I wanted to hear from CCWG and 1NET first, and that happened this week.<u></u><u></u></p><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">
I also moved this to bc-private just temporarily. <u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">David, Aparna, Philip, and I were on CCWG and David, Aparna, and others from business COMMUNITY, were on relevant calls last week. I will send a short assessment over week end. <u></u><u></u></p>
</div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">If members want public access to our discussions, we can move back to public list, but I didn't want to do that, without full consideration from BC members.<u></u><u></u></p>
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</div><p class="MsoNormal">From: <a href="mailto:sdelbianco@netchoice.org" target="_blank">sdelbianco@netchoice.org</a><br>To: <a href="mailto:bc-gnso@icann.org" target="_blank">bc-gnso@icann.org</a><br>CC: <a href="mailto:tim@domaintools.com" target="_blank">tim@domaintools.com</a>; <a href="mailto:chris@andalucia.com" target="_blank">chris@andalucia.com</a><br>
Subject: [bc-gnso] FOR REVIEW: BC comment on ICANN's focus for 5-year strategic plan<br>Date: Sat, 18 Jan 2014 17:27:45 +0000<u></u><u></u></p><div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></p>
<div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Attached is the current draft BC comment on ICANN’s Vision, Mission & Focus for 5-year Strategic Plan, which came out of last summer’s "brainstorming" by board, community and staff. (<a href="http://www.icann.org/en/about/planning/strategic-engagement/focus-areas-29oct13-en.pdf" target="_blank">link</a>)<u></u><u></u></p>
</div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Tim Chen and Chris Chaplow led drafting of the BC comment, with help from Martin Sutton, Marilyn Cade, and Andrew Mack.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Comments close 31-Jan, so today begins our 14-day review period.<u></u><u></u></p></div></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div>
<div><p class="MsoNormal">We need draft comments for Focus Area V: Defining role clarity for ICANN in the Internet governance ecosystem. <u></u><u></u></p></div><blockquote style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt"><div>
<p class="MsoNormal">Yesterday I shared my views about ICANN limiting its mission and avoiding entanglements in the broader I-Gov debate. If no BC members contribute text for Area V, then I can draft something next week.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div></blockquote><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Please REPLY ALL with edits (TRACK CHANGES)as soon as possible, since the comment deadline is 31-Jan-2014.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Thanks again to Tim and Chris for taking the lead on this.<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p></div>
<div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal">—<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Steve DelBianco<u></u><u></u></p></div><div><p class="MsoNormal">Vice chair for policy coordination<u></u><u></u></p></div></div>
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