<div dir="ltr"><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">Dear
Co-Chairs,</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">Dear
Lawyers</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">Dear CCWG Colleagues</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">As I
mentioned in the call on 5 and 7 April, a careful reading of the draft Bylaws
reveals that there is an intended or unintended proliferation of “GAC CARVE-OUT”
in many Articles of the main Bylaws as well as in Annex D</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">As you all
know the so-called “GAC CARVE-OUT” «was introduced at almost last calls </font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">Irrespective
of the degree of consensus on the “GAC CARVE-OUT” at CCWG, Final version of
Recommendations 1 &2 <span> </span><span> </span>including /taking into account the GAC Statements
as contained in its Marrakesh Communique was agreed by Chattering Organizations
and subsequently by ICANN Board on March 11 </font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">In order to
avoid any misinterpretation and avoid heavy drafting and also avoiding <span> </span>proliferation of “GAC CARVE-OUT” in many
Articles of the main Bylaws as well as in Annex D to the main draft, the most
easiest and accurate course of action would be:</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><ol style="list-style-type:decimal;direction:ltr"><li style="font-style:normal;font-weight:normal"><p style="font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:0pt"><span lang="EN-US">To
cut and paste indent 3 of paragraph 08 of Recommendation 1 and paragraph 74(
together with its indent) of Recommendation 2 in two specific legal text under
the title of “GAC CARVE-OUT”</span></p></li><li style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal"><p style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";font-size:11pt;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;margin-top:0cm;margin-bottom:10pt"><span lang="EN-US">Delete
all references to <span> </span><span> </span>“GAC CARVE-OUT” in the draft</span></p></li></ol><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">The above suggestion
precisely captures the objectives and implementation of “GAC CARVE-OUT” concept.</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Calibri"><font size="3"><font color="#000000"><span> </span>It is recalled that the carve out was crafted
to avoid the double Bites to an apple knowing that ccNSO has and continue to
have the privilege of that double bites to apple</font></font></font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">As for the
GAC CARVE-OUT, the objective was merely and solely to enable the community to
challenge the Board’s diction on GAC consensuses advise on the claim that such
decision was inconsistent with ICANN bylaws including ICANN Mission and nothing
else.</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">During the
debate it was reiterated by the author of “GAC CARVE-OUT” that its occurrence
probability is too low. It is surprising and even inappropriate that for a case
the probability of its occurrence is too low one need a very heavily loaded
provisions addressing that very low probable circumstances.</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">This is a
safe, wise, secure and confident approach which would totally eliminate any
intentional or unintentional misapplication of the concept.</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">It is to be
noted that, the current draft with such proliferation of “GAC CARVE-OUT” most
of which based on misinterpretation and unilateral expansion is totally
unacceptable.</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">This is a
very critical and delicate issue the unnecessary and unilateral proliferation
of which would be detrimental to GAC and would result in another net win for
private sector similar to the net win which was stated in the testimony before
the sub-committee of the House and thus would end up </font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">That GAC be
loser for the second time ( in addition to that imposed to it by ST18 and <span> </span>initial Carve out concept </font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">Regards</font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 10pt"><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#000000" face="Calibri" size="3">Kavouss </font></span></p><font color="#000000" face="Times New Roman" size="3">
</font></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2016-04-07 23:02 GMT+02:00 Samantha Eisner via bylaws-coord <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:bylaws-coord@icann.org" target="_blank">bylaws-coord@icann.org</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<div style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:14px">
<div>Dear Bylaws Coordination Group - </div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>In our reviews of the document since circulation on Sunday, the attorneys have identified a set of items that were unintentionally omitted from the document as it was being prepared for distribution, as well as a few typos and minor corrections that needed
to be addressed based upon the language agreed over the weekend. </div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>These updates do not address the items that have been under discussion in this group, the CWG or the CCWG. We are all continuing to follow those discussions so that changes can be incorporated into a new version.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>The clean up items that are reflected in the attached track changes version are:</div>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">a)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.2(f) - inserted omitted provision</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">b)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.3(v) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">c)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.3(w) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">d)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.3(d) - busted section reference (no longer a provision for Community
IRP in Bylaws; assuming it should just be reference to Community IRP in Annex D)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">e)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">4.3(e) - busted section reference (no longer a provision for Community
IRP in Bylaws; assuming it should just be reference to Community IRP in Annex D)</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">f)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">6.1(c) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">g)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">7.24 - inserted omitted provision
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">h)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">7.25 - inserted omitted provision
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">i)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">8.1 - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">j)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">9.2(b) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">11.3(f) - typo</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">k)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">16.3 - inserted omitted provision
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">l)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">18.1 - updated section reference</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">m)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">18.9(a) words missing at the end "shall be the action of the IFRT."<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">n)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">19.1(c)(i) first sentence should be "An SCWG Creation Approval shall
become effective..."<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">o)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">19.1(c)(ii) first sentence should be "An SCWG Creation Approval that
has been rejected..."<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">p)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">19.7(a) words missing at the end "shall be the action of the SCWG."<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">q)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">25.2 – Fixed heading<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">r)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">27.2(c)(iii) - inserted omitted provision</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">
<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">s)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">Annex D, Section 1.4(b)(ii) – fixed threshold reference from “two
or more” to “<b><u>three</u></b> or more”<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">t)<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman";font-size:7pt">
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">Annex E, Section 1(e) - typo</span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"><br>
</span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"><br>
</span></p>
<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">Thanks, </span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt"><br>
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<p style="-ms-text-autospace:;">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Calibri;font-size:14pt">Sam Eisner</span></p>
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