[cc-humanrights] session descriptions for ICANN53 BA

[Stephanie Perrin]

This looks really good, please see a few suggested edits below in bold 
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Stephanie Perrin
On 2015-04-27 2:27, Niels ten Oever wrote:
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> Dear all,
>
> Rafik and I have requested two meetings for ICANN53 in Buenos Aires:
> one general session to raise awareness around this issue and present
> our work, and one working session.
>
> We have been a bit late in submitting session descriptions, so it
> would be greatly appreciated if you could comment on these
> descriptions as soon as possible.
>
> Session 1 - ICANN's Corporate and Social Responsibility to Respect
> Human Rights
>
> There is a growing recognition*among some members*   of the ICANN community that
> some of*ICANN’s*  policies and other actions have implications for human
> rights,*including*freedom of expression and the right to privacy.*ICANN's*
> articles of incorporation*state*that ICANN will operate in
> conformity with international law, which includes human rights law.
> This session will focus on how*ICANN's*  policies and*procedures*  can be
> better harmonized with internationally recognized human rights and
> corporate social responsibility standards.
>
> This session will present the work done in the framework of the cross
> community working party on*ICANN's*  Corporate and Social Responsibility
> to Respect Human Rights and builds on the sessions held*in*London, Los
> Angeles, and Singapore*  as well as*  the previous reports that were produced on
> this topic.
>
>
> Session 2 - Working session of Cross Community Working Party on*ICANN's*
> Corporate and Social Responsibility to Respect Human Rights
>
> This cross community working party (CCWP) seeks to map and understand
> the issues and potential solutions related to corporate and social
> responsibilities of the Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and
> Numbers (ICANN)*.*   *This is*  related, but not limited to policies,
> procedures and operations,*with a*  *particular focus*  on*ICANN's*
> responsibility to respect human rights.
>
> *The goal of this session*  will*be to*  facilitate dialogue between members of the
> community that have an interest in this topic*. We will*  discuss in
> depth the research that has been*done, the*future work
> of the CCWP, as well as the new charter and report.
>
> Thanks in advance,
>
> Niels
>
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> Niels ten Oever
> Head of Digital
>
> Article 19
> www.article19.org
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