<div dir="ltr"><div><div>Dear Niels and Rafik,<br><br></div>Thank you very much for facilitating the organization of the sessions. I just have few minor suggestions to the text of session 1, made of top of Stephanie´s edits, mostly to avoid the repetition of words.<br><br></div><div>Great job<br><br></div><div>Best wishes to all,<br></div><div>Marília<br><br><br>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">Session 1
- ICANN's Corporate and Social Responsibility to Respect</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">Human
Rights</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">There is
a growing recognition <b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">among <s>some</s> members</span></b><span style> </span>of the ICANN community that</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">some of <b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">ICANN’s</span></b> policies and other actions have
implications for human</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">rights,<span style> </span><b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">including </span></b>freedom
of expression and the right to privacy. <b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">ICANN's</span></b></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">articles
of incorporation <b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">state </span></b>that ICANN
will operate in</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">conformity
with international law, which includes human rights law.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">This
session will focus on how <b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">ICANN's</span></b>
policies and <b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">procedures</span></b> can be</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">better
harmonized with internationally recognized human rights and</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">corporate
social responsibility standards.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><s><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">This
session will present</span></s><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US"> <span style="color:red">It will also be an
opportunity to share updates</span> on the work done in the framework of the
cross</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">community
working party on <b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">ICANN's</span></b> Corporate
and Social Responsibility</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">to
Respect Human Rights<span style="color:red">. The discussion</span> builds on
the sessions held <b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)">in </span></b>London, Los</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">Angeles,
and Singapore<b><span style="color:rgb(204,0,0)"> as well as</span></b> the previous
reports that were produced on</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US">this
topic.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10pt;font-family:"Courier New"" lang="EN-US"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Apr 28, 2015 at 5:28 AM, Stefania Milan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:netpolicy@stefaniamilan.net" target="_blank">netpolicy@stefaniamilan.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word">Looks great to me. Wondering how to make the title of session 1 more “attractive” and pointing to new developments, given that in its present form it is very similar to the ones used in previous meetings. <div>Something like ‘Update’? I know ‘Moving forward” has been used already. </div><div>Minor issue, anyway.</div><div>S.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div><div><div><blockquote type="cite"><span class=""><div>On Apr 27, 2015, at 9:29 AM, HIBBARD Lee <<a href="mailto:Lee.HIBBARD@coe.int" target="_blank">Lee.HIBBARD@coe.int</a>> wrote:</div><br></span><div><span class="">Thanks Niels. This looks fine. I would suggest making reference to the GAC working group as a sign of synergy and complementarity.<br>Speak soon. Regards to all.<br>Lee<br><br>From: <a href="mailto:cc-humanrights-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">cc-humanrights-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:cc-humanrights-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">mailto:cc-humanrights-bounces@icann.org</a>] On Behalf Of Stephanie Perrin<br>Sent: lundi 27 avril 2015 08:47<br>To: <a href="mailto:cc-humanrights@icann.org" target="_blank">cc-humanrights@icann.org</a>; Niels Oever<br>Subject: Re: [cc-humanrights] session descriptions for ICANN53 BA<br><br>This looks really good, please see a few suggested edits below in bold red text.<br>Stephanie Perrin<br>On 2015-04-27 2:27, Niels ten Oever wrote:<br><br></span><fieldset style="padding-top:10px;border:0px;border:3px solid #ccc;padding-left:20px"><legend style="font-weight:bold">Signed PGP part</legend><div style="padding-left:3px"><div><div class="h5">Hash: SHA1<br><br><br><br>Dear all,<br><br><br><br>Rafik and I have requested two meetings for ICANN53 in Buenos Aires:<br><br>one general session to raise awareness around this issue and present<br><br>our work, and one working session.<br><br><br><br>We have been a bit late in submitting session descriptions, so it<br><br>would be greatly appreciated if you could comment on these<br><br>descriptions as soon as possible.<br><br><br><br>Session 1 - ICANN's Corporate and Social Responsibility to Respect<br><br>Human Rights<br><br><br><br>There is a growing recognition among some members<span> </span> of the ICANN community that<br><br>some of ICANN’s policies and other actions have implications for human<br><br>rights,<span> </span> including freedom of expression and the right to privacy. ICANN's<br><br>articles of incorporation state that ICANN will operate in<br><br>conformity with international law, which includes human rights law.<br><br>This session will focus on how ICANN's policies and procedures can be<br><br>better harmonized with internationally recognized human rights and<br><br>corporate social responsibility standards.<br><br><br><br>This session will present the work done in the framework of the cross<br><br>community working party on ICANN's Corporate and Social Responsibility<br><br>to Respect Human Rights and builds on the sessions held in London, Los<br><br>Angeles, and Singapore as well as the previous reports that were produced on<br><br>this topic.<br><br><br><br><br><br>Session 2 - Working session of Cross Community Working Party on ICANN's<br><br>Corporate and Social Responsibility to Respect Human Rights<br><br><br><br>This cross community working party (CCWP) seeks to map and understand<br><br>the issues and potential solutions related to corporate and social<br><br>responsibilities of the Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and<br><br>Numbers (ICANN).<span> </span> This is related, but not limited to policies,<br><br>procedures and operations, with a<span> </span> particular focus on ICANN's<br><br>responsibility to respect human rights.<br><br><br><br>The goal of this session will be to facilitate dialogue between members of the<br><br>community that have an interest in this topic. We will discuss in<br><br>depth the research that has been done, the future work<br><br>of the CCWP, as well as the new charter and report.<br><br><br><br>Thanks in advance,<br><br><br><br>Niels<br><br><br><br></div></div><span class="">--<br><br>Niels ten Oever<br><br>Head of Digital<br><br><br><br>Article 19<br><br></span><a href="http://www.article19.org" target="_blank">www.article19.org</a><<a href="http://www.article19.org" target="_blank">http://www.article19.org</a>><span class=""><br><br><br><br>PGP fingerprint<span> </span> <span> </span> 8D9F C567 BEE4 A431 56C4<br><br><span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> <span> </span> 678B 08B5 A0F2 636D 68E9<br><br></span></div></fieldset><br><br>_______________________________________________<br><br>cc-humanrights mailing list<br><br><a href="mailto:cc-humanrights@icann.org" target="_blank">cc-humanrights@icann.org</a><<a href="mailto:cc-humanrights@icann.org" target="_blank">mailto:cc-humanrights@icann.org</a>><br><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cc-humanrights" target="_blank">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cc-humanrights</a><span class=""><br><br>_______________________________________________<br>cc-humanrights mailing list<br><a href="mailto:cc-humanrights@icann.org" target="_blank">cc-humanrights@icann.org</a><br><a href="https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cc-humanrights" target="_blank">https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cc-humanrights</a><br></span></div></blockquote></div><br></div></div></div></div><br>_______________________________________________<br>
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