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Since it is PDFed, I cannot edit. Here are my Comments:<br>
1. ON the title page it would be great if you could identify
yourself as NCSG.<br>
2. The fine print is way, way too small. The ownership/authorship
of those reports must be more prominent, and at least legible.<br>
Title or topic of report in a couple of words would be helpful,
particularly to non-english speakers<br>
5. Get rid of the blank space, put an apostrophe in ICANN's<br>
Since we will be referring to the Ruggies principles, it might be
good to add that to this slide (bullet one) again, to help folks
follow the discussion better.<br>
6. I am a little worried that this last slide looks too
ambitious.....but if the group feels our community is ready for it,
damn the torpedoes. IMHO, we are not ready yet....<br>
Thanks Niels for the opportunity to comment!<br>
Stephanie<br>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2015-06-21 11:41, Niels ten Oever
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<pre wrap="">Hi all,
I've been asked to give an overview of our CCWP work at the GAC WG and
at several constituencies, for this I made a draft presentation. Please
find it attached. Looking forward to hear what you think.
The presentations should take a maximum of 15 minutes, including Q&A, so
I'd like to keep it short. Let me know if you thing something is missing
or should be reformulated.
I'll also work on a presentation of the report for Wednesdays session, I
will send that to you when it's ready for comments.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Best,
Niels
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