<div dir="ltr">Hi Niels,<div><br></div><div>Great job - also looks fantastic to me! </div><div><br></div><div>While I echo Vidushi's and Corinne's concerns, I think it might be useful then to have two different visualizations. </div><div><br></div><div>To keep one like this (cause it is indeed super nice!) which is more minimalist - because I think its also useful for people who have a bit of knowledge on ICANN/IG; and another one with more context.</div><div><br></div><div>In my view this would be optimal, and also would allow us to have this very wavy nice visual!</div><div><br></div><div>Best wishes,</div><div><br></div><div>Monika </div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, May 9, 2016 at 7:18 PM, Niels ten Oever <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:niels@article19.org" target="_blank">niels@article19.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Thanks for your input Corinne and Vidushi! I just sent your comments<br>
back to the designer. I would like to give her a bit of creative freedom<br>
and she what she does with your comments, I like it that someone who is<br>
new to the processes tries to make sense of it. Let's see what the next<br>
iteration is, if we don;t like it we'll start adding text.<br>
<br>
Am a bit afraid though it might become too text heavy, eventhough<br>
Corinne's example was rly nice.<br>
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Cheers,<br>
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</span><span class="">On 05/09/2016 11:25 AM, <a href="mailto:vidushi@cis-india.org">vidushi@cis-india.org</a> wrote:<br>
> Dear Niels,<br>
><br>
> Thanks so much for this! The visualisation looks great to me, it does a<br>
> fantastic job of lending structure to different ICANN processes. I like<br>
> the horizontal flow!<br>
><br>
> I had a couple of thoughts that I think could be useful in developing<br>
> the next iteration:<br>
><br>
> 1. As we are aiming this work at newcomers, we could add some brief<br>
> context/make the connection of each right and why ICANN must be involved;<br>
> 2. I do agree with Corinne on the point of adding some background info<br>
> about ICANN somewhere in the visualisation. This would make it easier<br>
> for newcomers to add context to each right.<br>
><br>
> Cheers,<br>
><br>
> Vidushi<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> ----- On May 8, 2016, at 6:16 PM, Corinne Cath <<a href="mailto:cattekwaad@gmail.com">cattekwaad@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
><br>
> Hi niels,<br>
><br>
> Thanks for organizing all of this! The table is very nice. It is<br>
> clean and concise. The only thing I worry about is that is still a<br>
> lot of text and a little bland. I think it would be great if this<br>
> dendrogram would be part of a larger visualization that also gives<br>
> more background info about ICANN (beyond a glossary, which also<br>
> seems very useful).<br>
><br>
> I am adding a link to a visualization<br>
</span>> <<a href="http://visual.ly/funding-final-frontier" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">http://visual.ly/funding-final-frontier</a>>made about the budget of<br>
<span class="">> NASA that I think does a good job at combining text with themed<br>
> graphics, while not losing the ability to communicate the information.<br>
><br>
> Great first stab and look forward to seeing the next iteration.<br>
><br>
> Best,<br>
><br>
> Corinne <br>
><br>
><br>
> On Fri, May 6, 2016 at 12:25 PM, Niels ten Oever<br>
</span><span class="">> <<a href="mailto:niels@article19.org">niels@article19.org</a> <mailto:<a href="mailto:niels@article19.org">niels@article19.org</a>>> wrote:<br>
><br>
> Hi all,<br>
><br>
> After talking through all the details of human rights and ICANN<br>
> policy<br>
> with a designer she has taken a first stab at vizualizing the table.<br>
><br>
> Let me know what you all think and whether you like the direction in<br>
> which she is thinking.<br>
><br>
> Suggestions, questions, remarks are very welcome.<br>
><br>
> All the best,<br>
><br>
> Niels<br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------<br>
> Subject: Re: slide10<br>
> Date: Fri, 6 May 2016 12:55:12 +0200<br>
> From: Giulia De Amicis <<a href="mailto:giulia.dmcs@gmail.com">giulia.dmcs@gmail.com</a><br>
</span><span class="">> <mailto:<a href="mailto:giulia.dmcs@gmail.com">giulia.dmcs@gmail.com</a>>><br>
> To: Niels ten Oever <<a href="mailto:niels@article19.org">niels@article19.org</a><br>
</span><div><div class="h5">> <mailto:<a href="mailto:niels@article19.org">niels@article19.org</a>>><br>
><br>
><br>
><br>
> Dear Niels,<br>
><br>
> as promised, I'm sharing with you a first draft of the poster.<br>
> This is what I thought and came out with:<br>
><br>
> I see the structure of the information as a dendrogram. We have<br>
> in fact<br>
> different levels of information, with specific contents for each<br>
> point.<br>
> I still have to figure out how to include specific contents of a<br>
> subtopic ("Rights protection mechanism", in "freedom of expression),<br>
> which includes more specifics at a first level. I see it as another<br>
> layer, distinct from the others, maybe you can help me with this.<br>
> Overall, I think it will look good also in a vertical flow. We can<br>
> discuss this together, according to the final output.<br>
><br>
> I have an idea in order to make the contents more understandable<br>
> for a<br>
> general, non specific public (as me). As there is a lot of space<br>
> that we<br>
> can use in the infographic, perhaps we could built a glossary<br>
> which will<br>
> explain the acronyms used (and maybe a short description of each<br>
> one).<br>
> This will help to create a basic background and get people more<br>
> familiar<br>
> with the topic.<br>
><br>
> I look forward to hear your feedbacks and comments,<br>
><br>
> Best regards!<br>
><br>
> Giulia<br>
><br>
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