<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Hello everyone,<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I am sorry I haven’t been able to contribute on this draft but wanted to recognize Steve as well.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I will try to catch up ASAP. I had my three children ill this week and now they’re beginning to heal.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Best regards</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">León<br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">El 15/12/2014, a las 13:11, Jordan Carter <<a href="mailto:jordan@internetnz.net.nz" class="">jordan@internetnz.net.nz</a>> escribió:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="">Steve, can I echo Paul and say excellent work. We're in the midst of end of year here before the summer and I'll be travelling and away largely from this Saturday til 12 January, but will do what I can in that time.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Speak with you this evening and apologies I could not contribute more to this first couple of days of work.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">best,</div><div class="">Jordan</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br class=""><div class="gmail_quote">On 15 December 2014 at 15:05, Paul Rosenzweig <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:paul.rosenzweig@redbranchconsulting.com" target="_blank" class="">paul.rosenzweig@redbranchconsulting.com</a>></span> wrote:<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div lang="EN-US" link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72" class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class="">I’ve been unfortunately absent from this discussion. Excellent work Steve<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class="">P<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><b class=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#c00000" class="">**NOTE: OUR NEW ADDRESS -- EFFECTIVE 12/15/14 ***<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class="">509 C St. NE<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class="">Washington, DC 20002<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class="">Paul Rosenzweig<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class=""><a href="mailto:paul.rosenzweigesq@redbranchconsulting.com" target="_blank" class="">paul.rosenzweig@redbranchconsulting.com</a> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class="">O: <a href="tel:%2B1%20%28202%29%20547-0660" value="+12025470660" target="_blank" class="">+1 (202) 547-0660</a><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class="">M: <a href="tel:%2B1%20%28202%29%20329-9650" value="+12023299650" target="_blank" class="">+1 (202) 329-9650</a><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class="">Skype: <a href="tel:%2B1%20%28202%29%20738-1739" value="+12027381739" target="_blank" class="">+1 (202) 738-1739</a> or paul.rosenzweig1066<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class=""><a href="http://www.redbranchconsulting.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=19&Itemid=9" target="_blank" class="">Link to my PGP Key</a><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p><div class=""><div style="border:none;border-top:solid #e1e1e1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in" class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><b class=""><span style="font-size:11.0pt" class="">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt" class=""> Steve DelBianco [mailto:<a href="mailto:sdelbianco@netchoice.org" target="_blank" class="">sdelbianco@netchoice.org</a>] <br class=""><b class="">Sent:</b> Sunday, December 14, 2014 5:05 PM<br class=""><b class="">To:</b> <a href="mailto:ccwg-accountability2@icann.org" target="_blank" class="">ccwg-accountability2@icann.org</a><br class=""><b class="">Subject:</b> [Area 2] Updated draft 3 for Work Area 2<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></p><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">In this draft, I have merely re-arranged the accountability suggestions, into 3 sections:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><blockquote style="margin-left:30.0pt;margin-right:0in" class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal">1. Mechanisms to give the community authority over the ICANN corporation<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman",serif" class=""><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal">2. Mechanisms to prescribe or restrict actions of the ICANN corporation<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p></div></div></div></blockquote></div><blockquote style="margin-left:30.0pt;margin-right:0in" class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal">3. Mechanisms to ensure transparency of the ICANN corporation and the broader community<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></p></div></blockquote><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal">I presume staff will post this version to our Wiki so that all CCWG colleagues can review before our call on Tuesday. Both a pdf and Word doc are attached.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal">--Steve<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">On 12/12/14, 8:30 PM, "Steve DelBianco" <<a href="mailto:sdelbianco@netchoice.org" target="_blank" class="">sdelbianco@netchoice.org</a>> wrote:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Thanks to Malcolm Hutty for his edits today. And thanks to Marika Konings for sharing a <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/nCbxAg" target="_blank" class="">staff summary</a> of accountability proposals taken from the public comment period. This made our job much easier.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">That staff document had about 250 ideas. I skipped those focusing on IANA functions since that is out of our CCWG scope. I skipped items that were just comments on current accountability. About 100 of the items were consolidated into the second draft of our deliverable (attached). <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Our current draft list is very manageable, at under 2 pages. Mathieu suggests we eventually add tags so that related items can be grouped together (e.g., “Checks and Balances”, “Review”, Redress”, etc.)<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Per a question from Mathieu, I propose this rationale to designate whether in work stream 1 or 2:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><blockquote style="margin-left:30.0pt;margin-right:0in" class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""> Work Stream 1 is designated for accountability enhancements that must be in-place or firmly committed before IANA transition occurs. All other items are Work Stream 2, provided there are mechanisms in WS1 adequate to force implementation of WS2 items despite resistance from ICANN management and board. <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">How does that sound to you?<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div></blockquote><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Please review and comment over the weekend, so we can send to our colleagues on Monday morning. Feel free to add accountability mechanisms that were suggested earlier this year, even if outside of ICANN’s public comment forum.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">As I noted earlier, we are tasked now just to give a starting point of accountability enhancement suggestions. Our entire CCWG will surely develop more enhancements over the course of our work.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">—Steve<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div></div></div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">On 12/12/14, 5:08 AM, "Steve DelBianco" <<a href="mailto:sdelbianco@netchoice.org" target="_blank" class="">sdelbianco@netchoice.org</a>> wrote:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Thanks for volunteering to help with Work Area 2: to Review Input from Public Comment and Categorize Items into Work Streams 1 & 2.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Our deliverable (by Monday) is a list of items that have been suggested, and identify whether these belong in WS1 or WS2.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">As our rapporteur, I drafted a format that might be useful to our working group colleagues. And I filled-in about a page of items to show how this format could work. (attached)<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">There are around 70 comments in the two comment periods we need to examine. Not every comment includes suggested accountability mechanisms. The process I recommend is:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><blockquote style="margin-left:30.0pt;margin-right:0in" class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">First, scan the comment and for any accountability suggestion,and see if there’s already a similar item in the list/table. If so, add the comment source under the Source column (Google, BC, etc.) If not in the list yet, add the row and the source.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Second, Indicate whether this accountability item should be required before the IANA contract is relinquished (WS1). If it can wait until after transition, it goes into Work Stream 2 (WS2)<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Finally, add a hyperlink to the comment at the bottom of our document, so readers can find it easily.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div></blockquote><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Make sense? Now, how to divide the work?<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">I suggest that Paul Rosenzweig, Jordan Carter, and I go thru the 53 submissions in the <a href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-enhancing-accountability-06may14/" target="_blank" class="">Public comments on enhancing ICANN Accountability</a>, 7-May thru 30-Jul, 2014.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:3.0pt"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Could we have a few others volunteer to go thru the second set of comments? There are 21 submissions in the <a href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-enhancing-accountability-06sep14/index.html#00014" target="_blank" class="">Public comments on enhancing ICANN Accountability</a>, 6-Sep thru 13-Oct, 2014<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Ideas welcome!<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">—<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Steve DelBianco<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Executive Director<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">NetChoice<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><a href="http://www.netchoice.org/" target="_blank" class="">http://www.NetChoice.org</a> and <a href="http://blog.netchoice.org/" target="_blank" class="">http://blog.netchoice.org</a><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><a href="tel:%2B1.202.420.7482" value="+12024207482" target="_blank" class="">+1.202.420.7482</a><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div></div></div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p></div><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">On 12/11/14, 5:11 AM, "Grace Abuhamad" <<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org" target="_blank" class="">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>> wrote:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div></div><div class=""><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u> <u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b class=""><span style="font-size:14.0pt;color:#000090" class="">Work Area 2: Review Input from Public Comment and Categorize Items into Work Streams 1 & 2</span></b><span style="" class=""><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Deliverable: list of items that have been suggested and identify whether these belong in WS1, WS2 or both.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b class="">Coordinator/Rapporteur</b><span style="" class="">: Steve DelBianco<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Volunteers: <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc" class=""><li class="MsoNormal" style="">Jordan Carter <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="">Leon Sanchez <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></li></ul><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Wiki Link: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/YoMQAw" target="_blank" class="">https://community.icann.org/x/YoMQAw</a><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Mailing list address: <a href="mailto:ccwg-accountability2@icann.org" target="_blank" class="">ccwg-accountability2@icann.org</a> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Public Archives: <a href="http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/ccwg-accountability2/" target="_blank" class="">http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/ccwg-accountability2/</a> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class=""> <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br class="">_______________________________________________<br class="">
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