[ST-WP] Variety of formulation for Human Rights bylaw that were made.

[Dr Eberhard W Lisse]

Avri,

why does this go to ccwg-accountability4?

Actually,

Drazek_1 as amended by Lisse should read:

> Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will respect
> fundamental human rights, in particular the exercise of free expression,
> free flow of information and due process

which I can live with, whereas my preferred language would be:

> ICANN will respect fundamental human rights


:)-O

el
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> On Jul 31, 2015, at 16:50, Avri Doria <avri at acm.org> wrote:
> 
> [...]

> _Drazek as amended by Lisse_
> 
> /Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will be committed to
> respect the fundamental human rights, inter alia, the exercise of free
> expression and the free flow of information./
> 
> _Lisse 1_
> 
> /Within its mission and in its operations, ICANN will respect
> fundamental human rights, in particular the exercise of free expression,
> free flow of information and due process. /

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