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<div>To meet the need for tonight's document ‘freeze’, Cheryl and I quickly generated v10.1 (attached)</div>
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<div>We added more explanatory overview to page 1. </div>
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<div>We removed the previously struck-thru measure describing a general community veto of any decision, since that is not being proposed.</div>
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<div>We updated ST 21 to refer to GAC principles and Framework of Interpretations</div>
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<div>Mathieu’s suggested security measures in ST 1&2 and ST 11 were not taken up in Work Stream 1, so we noted these for Work Stream 2. </div>
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<div>We corrected measures where we assumed the community could force <u>implementation</u> of consensus or prior AoC recommendations. Now it reads:
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<div>"Another measure would allow an ATRT to recommend ICANN implement a recommendation of a prior AoC Review” and/or
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<div>"A proposed bylaws change would require ICANN board to respond to formal advice from advisory committees such as SSAC and RSSAC." </div>
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Made several other small edits to reflect what we know about the snapshot of CWG measures coming our way. </div>
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<div>We will likely have to revisit this after we see which proposed measures from CCWG and CWG will be published for comment.</div>
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<div>—Steve and Cheryl</div>
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