[Ccwg-auctionproceeds] Revised Proposed Final Report and Indicative Poll on Mechanisms - Deadline 3 December 2019

[Sam Lanfranco]

Two small suggestions:

RE Page 11: For Table: Division of Responsibilities - Mechanisms A, B, 
and  C. In the Table, for Mechanism B “Score successful and unsuccessful 
applicants”, would not better wording simply be “Independent Panel, 
jointly convened”, rather than “Depends on Division of Responsibility”?

  RE: Page 14: “ICANN Monitoring and Evaluation” reads “If part or all 
of the mechanism is external, ICANN should have an established process 
for monitoring and evaluating…”. Since this should be true for the 
mechanism whether it is external or internal, could this simply say: 
“The mechanism should have an established process for monitoring and 
evaluating…”?

Sam L.

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