<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Dear Marika,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Thank you for the follow-up</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class="gmail_default"><font face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif">I did some editing to the letter as the following:</font><br><br>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">-for phase 1. Removed
the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the second “initial” with “preliminary”<span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif">-for phase 5. Added "phase" to the following brackets. </font><font color="#000000" face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif">(as
organized per phase 1.); put a comment for anther word (not sure of its grammer, English is not my mother tongue).<span></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">-for Phase 6. I converted one "and" to &, then put a second “and” <span></span></p></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Attached is the document with my suggested edits.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Best wishes,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small">Nadira</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:small"><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear All,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed
during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best regards,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Marika <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Marika Konings<u></u><u></u></span></i></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) <u></u><u></u></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Email: <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">
<span style="color:#0563c1">marika.konings@icann.org</span></a> <u></u><u></u></span></i></p>
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