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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Many thanks Nadira for the clarification ..
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I see your point but just felt that consistency may be important for first-time readers ..<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> Nadira Alaraj [mailto:nadira.araj@gmail.com]
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, May 30, 2017 10:26 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Manal Ismail &lt;manal@tra.gov.eg&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org; Marika Konings &lt;marika.konings@icann.org&gt;<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you Manal,&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">It is okay with me, I was just trying to avoid the repetition of the word &quot;initial&quot; in the paragraph of phase 1.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On May 30, 2017 10:52 AM, &quot;Manal Ismail&quot; &lt;<a href="mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg" target="_blank">manal@tra.gov.eg</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Thanks Nadira .. I’m fine with either “initial” or “preliminary”, but would suggest that we use the
 same word in both the introductory paragraph and bullet point 1., for consistency and for readers to understand that we are referencing the same thing ..</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">
<a href="mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Nadira Alaraj<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 29, 2017 5:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Marika Konings &lt;<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org" target="_blank">ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif">Dear Marika,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif">Thank you for the follow-up</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif">I did some editing to the letter as the following:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif">-for phase 1.&nbsp; Removed the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the second “initial” with “preliminary”</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif">-for phase 5. Added &quot;phase&quot; to the following brackets. &nbsp;<span style="color:black">(as organized per phase 1.); &nbsp;put a comment for anther
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif">-for Phase 6. I converted one &quot;and&quot; to &amp;, then put a second “and”&nbsp;</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif">Best wishes,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,sans-serif">Nadira</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings &lt;<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter
 questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Marika Konings</span></i></b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)&nbsp;</span></i><o:p></o:p></p>
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