<div dir="auto"><div>Thanks Jonathan, </div><div dir="auto">I support Daniel comments and particularly the "or in service" in his suggested sentence:</div><div dir="auto"><span style="font-family:sans-serif"> "- Be aligned +or in service+ of the ICANN's mission and core principles"</span></div><div dir="auto">But it might be a need to expand on what in service could be. </div><div dir="auto">Nadira </div><div dir="auto"><div class="gmail_extra" dir="auto"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Oct 18, 2017 11:06 AM, "Daniel Dardailler" <<a href="mailto:danield@w3.org">danield@w3.org</a>> wrote:<br type="attribution"><blockquote class="quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Thanks Jonathan.<br>
<br>
I like this preample, but I'm a bit concerned with the way the listing at the end is presented, using "Projects should:".<br>
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I think it'd better to introduce the list with the first sentence only:<br>
<br>
"Therefore, the CCWG considers the following to be important guidelines to<br>
applicants seeking auction proceeds funding:"<br>
<br>
Otherwise, one might (or should) think that all the listed criteria have to be fulfilled at once, which would reduce the scope to the most constraining one, i.e.<br>
<br>
"- Support ICANN's community activities and consensus-building processes"<br>
<br>
Another option would be to include this ICANN specific criteria in the first one, e.g.<br>
"- Be aligned +or in service+ of the ICANN's mission and core principles"<br>
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And keep the "Projects should:" as a AND constraint.<br>
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Edit: I think there's a typo: “(concept).<br>
probably should just be concept.<div class="quoted-text"><br>
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On 2017-10-18 09:10, Jonathan Robinson wrote:<br>
</div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div class="quoted-text">
Thanks Marika,<br>
<br>
All, please be aware of the following definition of an “open and<br>
interoperable” internet as proposed by the informal drafting team.<br>
<br></div>
_Note the following:_<br>
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_ _<br>
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_1. __This is a draft, please consider whether or not it includes<div class="quoted-text"><br>
all the key concepts required for a preamble? If not, what else is<br></div>
missing? _<br>
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_2. __Please bear in mind that the preamble is a place for key<div class="quoted-text"><br>
concepts or overarching points rather than the fine detail of the bulk<br></div>
of the proposal._<div class="quoted-text"><br>
<br>
Thank-you,<br>
<br>
Jonathan<br>
<br>
On behalf of the drafting team<br>
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SUBJECT: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] Proposed Agenda - CCWG Auction<div class="quoted-text"><br>
Proceeds Meeting on 19 October at 14.00 UTC<br>
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Dear All,<br>
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Please find below the proposed agenda for the next new gTLD Auction<br>
Proceeds CCWG meeting which has been scheduled for Thursday 19 October<br>
at 14.00 UTC. Call details have been distributed separately. If you<br>
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PROPOSED AGENDA – NEW GTLD AUCTION PROCEEDS CCWG MEETING – 19<br>
OCTOBER 2017<br>
<br>
* Roll Call<br>
* Welcome<br>
* Review of open and interoperable Internet description (to be<br>
distributed shortly)<br>
* Review of examples (see<br>
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zQ66hCxrboAJPKeuU6nHwzHQwmU6g_3kS0JUSSC_tSk/edit" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/1zQ66hCxrboAJPKeuU6nHwzHQ<wbr>wmU6g_3kS0JUSSC_tSk/edit</a>)<br>
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* Next steps in relation to charter question 7 ‘(‘Should ICANN<div class="quoted-text"><br>
oversee the solicitation and evaluation of proposals, or delegate to<br>
or coordinate with another entity, including, for example, a<br>
foundation created for this purpose?’)<br></div>
* Planning for ICANN60<br>
* Confirm next steps and next meetings (Thursday 02 November 2017 -<div class="quoted-text"><br>
8:45– 10:15 Working Group F2F Meeting in Hall B Section B/C and<br>
13:30 – 15:00 Working Group F2F Meeting in Hall B Section B/C)<br>
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_MARIKA KONINGS_<br>
<br>
_Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet<br>
Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) _<br>
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_Email: <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a> _<br>
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