<div dir="auto">Hello Johnathan,<div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">Thanks for sharing this and I like that it does not try to define "open Internet" but was more focused on it as a concept in application to ICANN context. A few comments on the draft.</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">1. I wonder why root servers was specifically mentioned, wouldn't that already be covered in the DNS?</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">2. We mentioned "root servers"; literally there is logically one ICANN root but there are quite a number of other roots. I believe the intention is not to cover such non-icann root. I suggest tagging ICANN to that and perhaps also for DNS [1] as well</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">3. Bullet point 3 mention "...*whole* Internet community..." I think this suggests that the project must have a global scope but I wonder if that was intended? While I can live with that, I suggest removing "whole" as there might be certain projects that only have regional benefits which will be good to have.</div><div dir="auto"><br>Regards</div><div dir="auto">1. Unless the term DNS is an ICANN registered trademark<br><div data-smartmail="gmail_signature" dir="auto">Sent from my mobile<br>Kindly excuse brevity and typos</div></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Oct 18, 2017 8:10 AM, "Jonathan Robinson" <<a href="mailto:jrobinson@afilias.info">jrobinson@afilias.info</a>> wrote:<br type="attribution"><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div bgcolor="white" lang="EN-IE" link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class="m_-20492777241721546WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Thanks Marika,<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">All, please be aware of the following definition of an “open and interoperable” internet as proposed by the informal drafting team.<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Note the following:<u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></i></p><p class="m_-20492777241721546MsoListParagraph"><u></u><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><span>1.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span></span></i><u></u><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">This is a draft, please consider whether or not it includes all the key concepts required for a preamble? If not, what else is missing? <u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="m_-20492777241721546MsoListParagraph"><u></u><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><span>2.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span></span></i><u></u><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Please bear in mind that the preamble is a place for key concepts or overarching points rather than the fine detail of the bulk of the proposal.<u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Thank-you,<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">Jonathan <u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d">On behalf of the drafting team<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1f497d"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><div><div style="border:none;border-top:solid #e1e1e1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in"><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> Marika Konings [mailto:<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.<wbr>org</a>] <br><b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 17, 2017 8:57 PM<br><b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org" target="_blank">ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org</a><br><b>Subject:</b> [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] Proposed Agenda - CCWG Auction Proceeds Meeting on 19 October at 14.00 UTC<u></u><u></u></span></p></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear All,<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find below the proposed agenda for the next new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG meeting which has been scheduled for Thursday 19 October at 14.00 UTC. Call details have been distributed separately. If you did not receive the call details and/or require a dial-out, please contact <a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>. <u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Best regards,<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Marika<u></u><u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Proposed Agenda – new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG Meeting – 19 October 2017<u></u><u></u></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><ol style="margin-top:0in" start="1" type="1"><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Roll Call<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Welcome<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Review of open and interoperable Internet description (to be distributed shortly)<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Review of examples (see <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zQ66hCxrboAJPKeuU6nHwzHQwmU6g_3kS0JUSSC_tSk/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/<wbr>document/d/<wbr>1zQ66hCxrboAJPKeuU6nHwzHQwmU6g<wbr>_3kS0JUSSC_tSk/edit</a>) <u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Next steps in relation to charter question 7 ‘(‘Should ICANN oversee the solicitation and evaluation of proposals, or delegate to or coordinate with another entity, including, for example, a foundation created for this purpose?’)<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Planning for ICANN60<u></u><u></u></span></li><li class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Confirm next steps and next meetings (Thursday 02 November 2017<b> - </b>8:45– 10:15 Working Group F2F Meeting in Hall B Section B/C and 13:30 – 15:00 Working Group F2F Meeting in Hall B Section B/C)<u></u><u></u></span></li></ol><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Marika Konings<u></u><u></u></span></i></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) <u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Email: <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a> <u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> <u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO<u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal"><i><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Find out more about the GNSO by taking our <a href="http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso" target="_blank">interactive courses</a> and visiting the <a href="http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-efforts.htm#newcomers" target="_blank">GNSO Newcomer pages</a>. <u></u><u></u></span></i></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><u></u> <u></u></span></p></div></div><br>______________________________<wbr>_________________<br>
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