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<p>HI Emily,</p>
<p>Thanks for sending this public comment announcement. I think we
should clarify the following sentence. I think we should take out
the word "Although" The implication of what we are trying to say
comes clear with the sentence so as to make that word unnecessary.
I think the word although makes the sentence less clear. Also I
would add in the word **and**<br>
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<p>• The four options presented as possible mechanisms to
allocate auction proceeds funds, which are described in section
4.1, Although the CCWG initially considered four possible
mechanisms that could be used to implement the disbursement of new
gTLD Auction Proceeds, and which are all probably viable, after
analyzing these potential frameworks**, and** in light of legal
and fiduciary constraints and other criteria identified by the
CCWG and outlined in the report, the CCWG agreed to focus its
responses to the charter questions on two of the mechanisms that
is considers most promising to meet the constraints as well as
criteria identified.</p>
<p>Otherwise I think the wording is clear.</p>
<p>Thanks for allowing us to make comments on this draft.</p>
<p>Best,</p>
<p>Judith<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 10/3/2018 3:51 AM, Emily Barabas
wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find
attached draft text for the new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG
Initial Report public comment announcement page. You can
view samples of the way this text appears by clicking into
any of the public comment pages available here: <a
href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments"
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If you have any concerns about the attached text, please
raise them on the mailing list by end of day tomorrow (4
October 2018). <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Kind
regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Emily<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt">Emily Barabas
</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">| Policy Manager<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">ICANN</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt"> | Internet Corporation for
Assigned Names and Numbers<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt">Email: <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:emily.barabas@icann.org">emily.barabas@icann.org</a> |
Phone: +31 (0)6 84507976<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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