<HTML><BODY style="word-wrap: break-word; -khtml-nbsp-mode: space; -khtml-line-break: after-white-space; ">Hi,<DIV><BR class="khtml-block-placeholder"></DIV><DIV>I tend to think that privacy rights should be specifically enumerated. I don't fully understand the notion of registries having any proprietary rights to registry information, though I expect they do receive some use rights.</DIV><DIV><BR class="khtml-block-placeholder"></DIV><DIV>This may be a case for enumerated several rights; i.e. </DIV><DIV>"and which rights, including but not limited to, privacy and use rights ..."</DIV><DIV><BR class="khtml-block-placeholder"></DIV><DIV>I also have trouble with the word exists. What does it mean for a right to exist in something? I am not, obviously, one of the lawyers in the council, but i would think that this set of possible rights 'pertain to' or are 'associated with' (i am sure there is a perfect legal term) the date instead of existing within. To put it another way, are rights an attribute of the data?</DIV><DIV><BR class="khtml-block-placeholder"></DIV><DIV>a.</DIV><DIV><BR class="khtml-block-placeholder"></DIV><DIV><BR><DIV><DIV>On 19 feb 2006, at 21.09, Maria Farrell wrote:</DIV><BR class="Apple-interchange-newline"><BLOCKQUOTE type="cite"><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; border-spacing: 0px 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; text-align: auto; -khtml-text-decorations-in-effect: none; text-indent: 0px; -apple-text-size-adjust: auto; text-transform: none; orphans: 2; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; "><DIV dir="ltr" align="left"><SPAN class="718260220-19022006"><FONT face="Arial" color="#0000ff" size="2"><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255); font-family: Arial; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; ">'Proprietary rights' wouldn't cover the data protection aspect. Under EU legislation at least, data protection does not in any way imply ownership of the data by the data subject, but rather a set of obligations on the user.</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></DIV><DIV dir="ltr" align="left"><SPAN class="718260220-19022006"><FONT face="Arial" color="#0000ff" size="2"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="text-align: -khtml-left; "> </SPAN></DIV><DIV dir="ltr" align="left"><SPAN class="718260220-19022006"><FONT face="Arial" color="#0000ff" size="2"><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255); font-family: Arial; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; ">I suggest, simply; 'rights'.</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></DIV><DIV dir="ltr" align="left"><SPAN class="718260220-19022006"><FONT face="Arial" color="#0000ff" size="2"></FONT></SPAN><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="text-align: -khtml-left; "> </SPAN></DIV><DIV dir="ltr" align="left"><SPAN class="718260220-19022006"><FONT face="Arial" color="#0000ff" size="2"><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 255); font-family: Arial; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; ">Maria</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></DIV><BR><DIV class="OutlookMessageHeader" lang="en-us" dir="ltr" align="left"><HR tabindex="-1"><FONT face="Tahoma" size="2"><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; ">From:</SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; "> owner-council@gnso.icann.org [<A href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org</A>] </SPAN><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; ">On Behalf Of </SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; ">Marilyn Cade</SPAN><BR style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; "><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; ">Sent:</SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; "> Sunday, February 19, 2006 8:56 PM</SPAN><BR style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; "><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; ">To:</SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; "> 'olof nordling'; <A href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</A></SPAN><BR style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; "><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; font-weight: bold; text-align: -khtml-left; ">Subject:</SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; "> RE: [council] New draft ToR for PDP on contractual conditions for existing gTLDs</SPAN><BR style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: -khtml-left; "></FONT><BR style="text-align: -khtml-left; "></DIV><DIV></DIV><DIV class="Section1"><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" color="navy" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 128); font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 128); font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; ">Perhaps the term is “proprietary rights” or various forms of proprietary rights”…</SPAN><O:P style="color: rgb(0, 0, 128); font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" color="navy" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 128); font-size: 13.3333px; "><O:P style="color: rgb(0, 0, 128); font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 128); font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "> </SPAN></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><DIV><DIV class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 16px; " align="center"><FONT face="Times New Roman" size="3"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 16px; text-align: center; "></SPAN><HR tabindex="-1" align="center" width="100%" size="2"></SPAN></FONT></DIV><P class="MsoNormal"><B style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 16px; font-weight: bold; "><FONT face="Tahoma" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; ">From:</SPAN></SPAN></FONT></B><FONT face="Tahoma" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "> owner-council@gnso.icann.org [<A href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org</A>] </SPAN><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; "><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; ">On Behalf Of </SPAN></SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; ">olof nordling</SPAN><BR style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; "><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; ">Sent:</SPAN></SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "> Sunday, February 19, 2006 12:19 PM</SPAN><BR style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; "><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; ">To:</SPAN></SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "> <A href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</A></SPAN><BR style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><B style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; "><SPAN style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; font-weight: bold; ">Subject:</SPAN></SPAN></B><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 13.3333px; "> [council] New draft ToR for PDP on contractual conditions for existing gTLDs</SPAN></SPAN></FONT><O:P style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 16px; "></O:P></P></DIV><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Times New Roman" size="3"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 16px; "><O:P style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 16px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: 16px; "> </SPAN></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; ">Dear Council members,</SPAN><O:P style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; ">As agreed, I have modified the ToR in line with the discussions at the Council call 16 February, with most valued help from other staff attending the call. See attachment. I have used the paragraph wordings supplied to the list by Ross and Bruce (taking the latest submission in one case when both had provided slightly different texts) and staff notes for a couple of other agreed changes. I must emphasize that the exact outcome was not always crystal clear so please consider the new draft carefully.</SPAN><O:P style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><O:P style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "> </SPAN></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; ">Also, regarding Marilyn’s recent mail, the expression “privacy rights” remains in 5a, but I do share Marilyn’s concern that this expression may be amiss. It is probably not “intellectual property rights” we’re looking for either and it may be appropriate to use a more explicit sentence to capture the gist of what is intended.</SPAN><O:P style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><O:P style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "> </SPAN></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; ">Best regards</SPAN><O:P style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P><P class="MsoNormal"><FONT face="Arial" size="2"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "><SPAN class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; ">Olof</SPAN><O:P style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 13.3333px; "></O:P></SPAN></FONT></P></DIV><BR class="Apple-interchange-newline"></SPAN></BLOCKQUOTE></DIV><BR></DIV></BODY></HTML>