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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Kristina and All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Oops, there are too many words. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>This is the current language:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Further
resolved that ICANN staff be required to include<b> </b>all individual elements
in the Whois data which<b><i> </i></b>surveyed sources in the descriptive study
report have been misused are included in study analysis, and are not discarded
or otherwise eliminated if the actual data source is unclear or multiple
possible sources are found during online search verification. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>See if this is clearer to understand, if not gracefully written
(edits in caps/strikethroughs):<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Further
resolved that ICANN staff be required to include<b> </b>all individual elements
in the Whois data which<b><i> </i></b>surveyed sources in the descriptive study
IDENTIFY AS HAVING BEEN misused <s>are included</s> in study analysis, and are
not discarded or otherwise eliminated if the actual data source is unclear or
multiple possible sources are found during online search verification. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Does this help? (I can send around an edited version of the
amendment) but wanted to verify first.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Liz<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> owner-council@gnso.icann.org
[mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Rosette, Kristina<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, August 04, 2010 9:45 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'Gomes, Chuck'; Council GNSO<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [council] RE: Amendment to Motion to Pursue Whois Study # 1<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";
color:blue'>It could be sleep deprivation, but the third "Further
resolved" doesn't seem to make any sense. Is it missing any words or
is it me?</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> owner-council@gnso.icann.org
[mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, August 04, 2010 11:20 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Council GNSO<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [council] Amendment to Motion to Pursue Whois Study # 1<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>On behalf of the RySG, I
would like to propose an amended version of the motion to proceed with Whois
Study # 1 on misuse. The proposed changes are highlighted</span> <span
style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>in the attached file.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black'><<Motion
Amendment for GNSO Council WHOIS Study 1 - 4 Aug 2010.docx>> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In my role as chair, I
would like to ask Mike Rodenbaugh, who</span> <span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>made
the original motion, and Terry Davis, who seconded the motion, if they would
consider the amendments friendly.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Chuck</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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